Hi Mach, Many thanks for your detailed review.
I agree with your comments and plan to address them in the next revision, during the upcoming week. Also, adding Spring WG. Thanks Regards … Zafar From: Mach Chen <[email protected]> Date: Friday, November 29, 2019 at 4:34 AM To: "Zafar Ali (zali)" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]> Cc: Daniel Voyer <[email protected]>, Satoru Matsushima <[email protected]>, "Clarence Filsfils (cfilsfil)" <[email protected]> Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-02.txt Hi, I have read this reversion, over all, it looks good to me, I think it’s ready for WG LC once the following comments addressed. 1. There are some sections (e.g., Section 4.1.3, Section 4.3) are just informational and do have concrete context, the document would have been clearer and more concise if we remove those sections or put them into an appendix section. 2. In addition, the traceroute section needs some clean-up. E.g., Section 4.2.2.2. Tracing SRv6 Overlay and Section 4.1.2.2. Segment-by-segment ping using O-flag (Proof of Transit) has functionality overlap. Best regards, Mach From: Zafar Ali (zali) [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Friday, November 29, 2019 4:04 PM To: [email protected] Cc: Zafar Ali (zali) <[email protected]>; Mach Chen <[email protected]>; Daniel Voyer <[email protected]>; Satoru Matsushima <[email protected]>; Clarence Filsfils (cfilsfil) <[email protected]> Subject: FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-02.txt Dear WG, We have updated the SRv6 OAM with editorial changes to address comments received f2f during IETF. The diffs are mainly editorial in nature. https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-02 Please review the draft and advise of your comments. Thanks Regards … Zafar (on behalf of the co-authors) From: "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Date: Wednesday, November 20, 2019 at 11:58 PM To: Mach Chen <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, "Zafar Ali (zali)" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, Daniel Voyer <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, Satoru Matsushima <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, "Clarence Filsfils (cfilsfil)" <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-02.txt A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-02.txt has been successfully submitted by Zafar Ali and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam Revision: 02 Title: Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) in Segment Routing Networks with IPv6 Data plane (SRv6) Document date: 2019-11-20 Group: 6man Pages: 23 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-02.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-02 Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-02 Abstract: This document defines building blocks for Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) in Segment Routing Networks with IPv6 Dataplane (SRv6). The document also describes some SRv6 OAM mechanisms. Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. The IETF Secretariat
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