Dear Authors,
Thank you for this document. I have only minor edits/comments as follows:
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== Outdated reference: A later version (-11) exists of
draft-ietf-pce-circuit-style-pcep-extensions-09
== Outdated reference: A later version (-19) exists of
draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-16
Jim> Please update the above references.
122 irrespective of changing network utilization other services
Jim> s/other services/from other services.
135 architecture [RFC8402] together with a centralised controller such as
Jim> s/centralised/centralized
219 ensure SLA compliance for the live of the CS-SR Policy.
Jim> s/live/life
234 * When using configuration, a appropriate YANG model such as
Jim> s/a/an
291 4.1. Managing Bandwidth
293 In a network, resources are represented by links of certain
294 bandwidth. In a circuit switched network such as SONET/SDH, OTN or
295 DWDM resources (timeslots or a wavelength) are allocated for a
Jim> Please expand SONET/SDH, OTN and DWDM as none of these are well-known
abbreviations as per https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=abbrev_list
299 be sent. This allows for the total reservations to exceed the link
300 bandwidth as well in general for link congestion.
Jim> Please correct the last sentence above. “As well in general for link
congestion” does not make sense.
329 * Allocate a dedicated Diffserv codepoint to map traffic of CS-SR
Jim> Please provide a reference for Diffserv.
396 o may be pre-computed.
398 o may be pre-programmed.
400 o may have to be disjoint.
Jim> Should the above bullet points be normative language e.g, s/may/MAY
491 A and Z to initiate the candiate paths of the CS-SR Policy by sending
Jim> s/candiate/candidate
556 signaling mechanism available..
Jim> s/../.
Jim
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