Hi there,

http://www.hwaci.com/sw/sqlite/cerod.html contains the sentence " This
utility program (called cerod_build.exe) reads an ordinary,
uncompressed and unencrypted SQLite database built by a public-domain
version of SQLite and constructs and equivalent compressed and
encrypted CEROD database."

The second "and" should be "an": "... and constructs _an_ equivalent ...".

It also goes on to say that "After you purchase a license to use
CEROD, we will be issued a userid and password to the on-line software
configuration management system for CEROD. "

I presume that should either be "you will be issued" or "we will issue
you"; rather than "we will be issued".

And then, "You can then log in and download the latest CEROD source
code and documentation whenever you like. Your license is perpetual,
so your login never expires. You can login as often as you like to
obtain the latest updates. "

It might be good to be consistent about whether the user will "log in"
or "login" between the first and the last of those three sentences.
(In the second sentence, it's a noun, so it can only be the one-word
variant.)

Cheers,
Philip
-- 
Philip Newton <philip.new...@gmail.com>
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