On 14/10/14 11:29, Florian Schmaus wrote: > On 08.10.2014 18:33, XMPP Extensions Editor wrote: > > This message constitutes notice of a Last Call for comments on > > XEP-0322 (Efficient XML Interchange (EXI) Format). > > > Abstract: This specification describes how EXI compression can be > > used in XMPP networks. > > > URL: http://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0322.html > > > This Last Call begins today and shall end at the close of business > > on 2014-10-21. > > > Please consider the following questions during this Last Call and > > send your feedback to the [email protected] discussion list: > > > 5. Is the specification accurate and clearly written? > > This is more are generic comment on how to deal with this then a EXI > specific one: > > XEP-322 § 2.2.2 "…it sends a setup stanza…" but according to RFC 6120 > § 8 "Three kinds of XML stanza are defined …: <message/>, <presence/>, > and <iq/>." > > So a setup element is not a stanza. I suggest having "stanza" replaced > by "stream element". There are maybe other wrong uses of "stanza" in > this XEP (and others).
Related, I think it will be worthwhile to go through the XEP and fix a few sentences where needed. E.g. §2.4 has this line in it: " In addition, the network should allow clients and servers to use not well-known port because this commeunication involves alternative TCP port," which took me more than one pass to scan and parse. Edwin
