jmitchell 2002/10/26 19:44:14
Modified: doc/userGuide preface.xml
Log:
Update to fix a few typos
Revision Changes Path
1.9 +8 -8 jakarta-struts/doc/userGuide/preface.xml
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--- preface.xml 31 Aug 2002 13:15:02 -0000 1.8
+++ preface.xml 27 Oct 2002 02:44:14 -0000 1.9
@@ -38,18 +38,18 @@
<p><a target="#jwst"></a>If you are familiar with Java, but not these
technologies,
the best overall starting point is
<a href="http://java.sun.com/webservices/docs/1.0/tutorial/index.html";><b>The
Java Web Services Tutorial</b></a>.
- This is also available for download as a
- <a
href="http://java.sun.com/webservices/docs/1.0/tutorial/doc/JavaWSTutorial.pdf";>PDF</a>.
+ This is also available for download in
+ <a
href="http://java.sun.com/webservices/docs/1.0/tutorial/doc/JavaWSTutorial.pdf";>PDF</a>
format.
</p>
- <p>If you've created web applications for other platforms, you may able to
follow along
+ <p>If you've created web applications for other platforms, you may be able to
follow along
and visit the other references as needed. The core technologies used by Struts
are
also used by most other Java web development products, so the background
information will be
useful in any Java project.
</p>
<p><a target="#jt"></a>If you are not familiar with the Java language generally,
- then the best start starting point is
+ then the best starting point is
<a href="http://java.sun.com/docs/books/tutorial/index.html";><b>The Java
Tutorial</b></a>.
This overlaps with the Java Web Services Tutorial in some places, but the two
work well together.
</p>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
a HTML document. The browser then formats and displays the document to its
user. HTTP is used to
transport more than HTML, but HTML is the lingua franca of the Web and web
applications. </p>
- <p>Some Java engineers working web applications write their own HTML. Others
leave that to the
+ <p>While building web applications, some Java developers will write their own
HTML. Others leave that responsibility to the
page designers.</p>
<p>For more about HTTP, HTML, and User Agents, see:</p>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
<p>Java applications, including web applications, are often configured using
<a
href="http://java.sun.com/j2se/1.4.1/docs/api/java/util/Properties.html";>Properties</a>
files. Properties files are the basis for the
- <a
href="http://java.sun.com/j2se/1.4.1/docs/api/java/util/ResourceBundle.html";>ResourceBundles</a>
that Struts uses to provide messages resources
+ <a
href="http://java.sun.com/j2se/1.4.1/docs/api/java/util/ResourceBundle.html";>ResourceBundles</a>
that Struts uses to provide message resources
to an application. </p>
<p>For more about Properties files, see: </p>
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
<section name="0.7 Java Servlets" href="servlets">
<p>Much of the <a href="#cycle">HTTP Request/Response cycle</a> nuts-and-bolts
are handled by Sun's
<a href="http://java.sun.com/products/servlet/";>Java Servlet</a> platform. This
casts HTTP
- into an object-orientated form so that developers can better concentrate what
+ into an object-orientated form so that developers can better concentrate on what
they need their application to do -- rather than the mechanics of HTTP.</p>
<p>Struts provides a ready-to-use servlet for your application. As a Struts
developer, you
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@
parses the request URI (contextPath, servletPath, and pathInfo) are
available separately.</li>
<li><em>User Information</em> - If you are using
- <a href="#security">Container Managed Security</a>, you can ask
+ <a href="#security">Container Managed Security</a>, you can ask for
the username of the authenticated user, retrieve a
<code>Principal</code> object representing the current user, and
whether the current user is authorized for a specified role.</li>
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