Here are two small patches for the user manual. Trying to avoid repetition and use a bit more common sentences. So far I only took a look at the start of the manual...
miika
From b931fe1cb654ba6911de620c5d02e311f26b2607 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Miika Turkia <[email protected]> Date: Wed, 30 Jul 2014 07:26:04 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Tune the introduction paragraph of user manual Signed-off-by: Miika Turkia <[email protected]> --- Documentation/user-manual.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt index 0184de5..27f15ed 100644 --- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt +++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt @@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ Linus Torvalds, Miika Turkia, Amit Chaudhuri, Jan Schubert, Salvador Cuñat [blue]#_Version 4.2, July 2014_# -Welcome as a user of _Subsurface_, an advanced dive logging programme with +Welcome as a user of _Subsurface_, an advanced dive logging program with extensive infrastructure to describe, organise, interpret and print scuba -and free dives. _Subsurface_ offers many advantages above other similar +and free dives. _Subsurface_ offers many advantages over other similar software solutions: - Do you use two different dive computer brands, each with its own proprietary @@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ software solutions: interface for downloading dive logs from all these different pieces of equipment and to store and analyse the dive logs within a unified system. - Do you use more than one operating system? _Subsurface_ is fully compatible - with Mac, Linux and Microsoft, allowing you to access your dive log on each - of your operating systems in a unified way. - - Do you use Linux or Mac and your dive computer has only Microsoft-based software + with Mac, Linux and Windows, allowing you to access your dive log on each + of your operating systems with a single application. + - Do you use Linux or Mac and your dive computer has only Windows-based software for downloading dive information (e.g. Mares)? _Subsurface_ provides a way of storing and analysing your dive logs on other operating systems. -- 1.9.1
From 4982032e924c8c9bb880ee5a7885a207dbe85b45 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Miika Turkia <[email protected]> Date: Wed, 30 Jul 2014 07:19:31 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Fix repetition in user manual Signed-off-by: Miika Turkia <[email protected]> --- Documentation/user-manual.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt index 4465421..0184de5 100644 --- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt +++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt @@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ visibility during the dive on a 5-point scale by clicking the appropriate star. *Tags*: Tags that describe the type of dive performed may be entered here (separated by commas). Examples of common tags are boat, drift, training, cave etc. _Subsurface_ has many built-in tags. Auto completion is once again offered. -For instance, if, for instance, +cav+ was typed, then the tags *cave* and *cavern* are +For instance, if +cav+ was typed, then the tags *cave* and *cavern* are shown for the user to choose from. *Notes*: Any additional information can be typed here. -- 1.9.1
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