Author: Peter Keung
Date: 2007-02-13 02:35:02 +0100 (Tue, 13 Feb 2007)
New Revision: 4649

Log:
Edited UserInput eZ Component tutorial
Modified:
   trunk/UserInput/docs/tutorial.txt

Modified: trunk/UserInput/docs/tutorial.txt
===================================================================
--- trunk/UserInput/docs/tutorial.txt   2007-02-13 01:17:23 UTC (rev 4648)
+++ trunk/UserInput/docs/tutorial.txt   2007-02-13 01:35:02 UTC (rev 4649)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-eZ components - UserInput
+eZ Components - UserInput
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 .. contents:: Table of Contents
@@ -6,75 +6,75 @@
 Introduction
 ============
 
-This component makes secure handling of input data easier. With a user defined
-form definition the component analyses, filters and returns GET and POST data.
-The component will not render forms to HTML from its definition, but only
-handles incoming data. The filtering is done through PHP's filter_ extension
-and the component supports all filters and flags that this extension supports.
+The UserInput component facilitates the secure handling of input data. With a
+user-defined form definition, the component analyzes, filters and returns GET
+and POST data. The component will not render forms to HTML from its 
definition, but only
+handle incoming data. Filtering is done through PHP's filter_ extension;
+accordingly, UserInput supports all filters and flags that this extension 
supports.
 
 
 Class overview
 ==============
 
 ezcInputForm
-  Is the class that validates the definition, processes the form data and
+  This class validates the definition, processes the form data and
   provides functionality for accessing the submitted data.
 
 ezcInputFormDefinitionElement
-  The container class that wraps around the definition for each form element.
-  It contains whether the field is optional or required, the filter name and
-  optional flags for the filter.
+  This container class wraps around the definition for each form element.
+  It contains information about whether the field is optional or required, the
+  filter name and optional flags for the filter.
 
 
-Basic Usage
+Basic usage
 ===========
 
-The example in this section is cut in multiple parts to allow easier
-explanation. 
+The example in this section is separated into multiple parts to allow for
+easier explanation. 
 
 .. include:: tutorial_example_01_def.php
    :literal:
 
-In the lines above we prepare a definition array that defines our form. A
+In the lines above, we prepare a definition array that defines our form. A
 definition array consists of an associative array where the key is the input
-field name and the value an object of the ezcInputFormDefinitionElement class. 
+field name and the value is an object of the ezcInputFormDefinitionElement 
class. 
 
 The first parameter to the constructor is either
-ezcInputFormDefinitionElement::REQUIRED for fields that *have* to be submitted
+ezcInputFormDefinitionElement::REQUIRED for fields that *must* be submitted
 (although they can be empty) or ezcInputFormDefinitionElement::OPTIONAL for
-optional fields. The second parameter is the filter to use for this input
+optional fields. The second parameter is the filter to use for the input
 field. The filters are defined in PHP's filter_ extension, and can also be
 retrieved by the PHP function input_filters_list(). The third optional
 parameter contains flags to the filter. Those are documented in the 
 `filter documentation`_.
 
-In the definition above we define four input fields, which are all required.
+In the definition above, we define four input fields that are all required.
 Two of them are strings (firstName and lastName), one is an integer (age) and
-the last one an e-mail address (email).
+the last one is an e-mail address (email).
 
 .. include:: tutorial_example_01_init.php
    :literal:
 
-Here we just initialize the variables that are used to show the current value
-and whether invalid data was submitted to the form. This is later used to
+Here, we initialize the variables that are used to show the current value
+and whether invalid data was submitted to the form. This is used later to
 render the form.
 
 .. include:: tutorial_example_01_process.php
    :literal:
 
-In line 2 we check whether there was GET data submitted to this script. Besides
-the ezcInputForm::hasGetData() method to verify if there is GET data available
-there is another method, ezcInputForm::hasPostData(), which does the similar
-thing but then for POST data. Upon instantiation of the ezcInputForm object in
-line 4 the component will parse the input data and makes the input fields
-available through the object. In case one of the required input variables did
-not exist in the input data this instantiation will throw an
+In line 2, we check whether there was GET data submitted to this script. Aside
+from the ezcInputForm::hasGetData() method to verify if there is GET data
+available, there is another method, ezcInputForm::hasPostData(), which does the
+same thing but for POST data. Upon instantiation of the ezcInputForm object in
+line 4, the component will parse the input data and make the input fields
+available through the object. In case one of the required input variables does
+not exist in the input data, this instantiation will throw an
 ezcInputFormFieldNotFoundException exception.
 
-In lines 6 to 20 we loop over all elements from the definition and check (line
-10) whether the field has valid data. When there is valid data available we
-retrieve the value from the $form object through a property (line 12) and in
-case the data for a field was invalid we fetch the raw data with the
+In lines 6 to 20, we loop over all elements from the definition and check (in 
line
+10) whether the field has valid data. When there is valid data available, we
+retrieve the value from the $form object through a property (in line 12). In
+case the data for a field is invalid, we fetch the raw data with the
 ezcInputForm::getUnsafeRawData() function, encode that with htmlspecialchars_
 and set the parameter with the name "property\_<fieldname>" to the encoded raw
 data. We also record in the "warning\_<fieldname>" variable if the field has
@@ -84,14 +84,14 @@
 .. include:: tutorial_example_01_form.php
    :literal:
 
-The last part of this example renders the form. If previous data was submitted
-it will be shown as default value in the input fields. If the data for one of
-the fields was invalid it will show that next to the field as well.
+The last part of this example renders the form. If previous data was submitted,
+it will be shown as the default value in the input fields. If the data for one 
of
+the fields is invalid, this will be shown next to the field.
 
-More Information
+More information
 ================
 
-The filters and its parameters are documented are documented in the
+The filters and their parameters are documented in the
 `filter documentation`_.
 
 .. _filter: http://pecl.php.net/filter

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