Author: gjb
Date: Tue Sep 20 20:32:35 2016
New Revision: 306054
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/306054

Log:
  Tweak wording and add clarifications for several sections.
  
  Submitted by: dhw
  Approved by:  re (implicit)
  Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  releng/11.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: releng/11.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- releng/11.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml        Tue Sep 
20 19:21:41 2016        (r306053)
+++ releng/11.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml        Tue Sep 
20 20:32:35 2016        (r306054)
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
 
     <para>Source-based upgrades (those based on recompiling the &os;
       base system from source code) from previous versions are
-      supported, according to the instructions in
+      supported, using the instructions in
       <filename>/usr/src/UPDATING</filename>.</para>
 
     <important>
@@ -467,7 +467,7 @@
        will set the default regulatory domain to
        <literal>FCC</literal> on wireless interfaces.  As a result,
        newly created wireless interfaces with default settings will
-       have less chances to violate country-specific
+       have less chance to violate country-specific
        regulations.</para>
 
       <para revision="302558">A bug in the &man.ul.1; utility that
@@ -507,8 +507,8 @@
       <para revision="278433">The &man.xz.1; utility has been updated
        to support multi-threaded compression.</para>
 
-      <para revision="281373">The &man.nvi.1; utility has been updated
-       to version 2.1.3.</para>
+      <para revision="281373">The &man.nvi.1; utility and related
+       utilities have been updated to version 2.1.3.</para>
 
       <para revision="281806">The &man.wpa.supplicant.8; and
        &man.hostapd.8; utilities have been updated to version
@@ -527,11 +527,12 @@
        IPv6:0:0 versus IPv6:0.  This change requires that
        configuration data (including maps, files, classes, custom
        ruleset, etc.) must use the same format, so make certain such
-       configuration data is upgrading.  As a very simple check
-       search for patterns like 'IPv6:[0-9a-fA-F:]*::' and 'IPv6::'.
-       To return to the old behavior, set the m4 option
-       <literal>confUSE_COMPRESSED_IPV6_ADDRESSES</literal> or the cf
-       option <literal>UseCompressedIPv6Addresses</literal>.</para>
+       configuration data is in place before upgrading.  As a very
+       simple check search for patterns like 'IPv6:[0-9a-fA-F:]*::'
+       and 'IPv6::'.  To return to the old behavior, set the m4
+       option <literal>confUSE_COMPRESSED_IPV6_ADDRESSES</literal> or
+       the cf option
+       <literal>UseCompressedIPv6Addresses</literal>.</para>
 
       <para revision="285275">The &man.tcpdump.1; utility has been
        updated to version 4.7.4.</para>
@@ -717,8 +718,9 @@
 
       <para revision="273955">A new &man.rc.8; script,
        <filename>growfs</filename>, has been added, which will resize
-       the root filesystem on boot if <filename>/firstboot</filename>
-       exists and <literal>growfs_enable</literal> is enabled in
+       the root filesystem to fill the device on boot if
+       <filename>/firstboot</filename> exists and
+       <literal>growfs_enable</literal> is enabled in
        &man.rc.conf.5;.</para>
 
       <para revision="275299">The <filename>mrouted</filename>
@@ -814,13 +816,13 @@
        updated to consistently set <literal>errno</literal> on
        failure.</para>
 
-      <para revision="279663">The &man.qsort.3; functions have been
-       updated to be able to handle 32-bit aligned data on 64-bit
-       platforms, also providing a significant improvement in 32-bit
-       workloads.</para>
+      <para revision="279663">The &man.qsort.3;-related functions have
+       been updated to be able to handle 32-bit aligned data on
+       64-bit platforms, also providing a significant improvement in
+       32-bit workloads.</para>
 
       <para revision="281130">Several standard include headers have
-       been updated to use of <application>gcc</application>
+       been updated to make use of <application>gcc</application>
        attributes, such as <literal>__result_use_check()</literal>,
        <literal>__alloc_size()</literal>, and
        <literal>__nonnull()</literal>.</para>
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