Author: gjb
Date: Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017
New Revision: 318467
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318467

Log:
  Fix FDP style nits reported by igor(1).
  Bump copyright year in readme/article.xml.
  
  Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml

Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml  Thu May 18 
15:41:59 2017        (r318466)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml  Thu May 18 
16:24:10 2017        (r318467)
@@ -1,16 +1,20 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
 <!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook XML V5.0-Based Extension//EN"
-        "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [
+       "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [
 <!ENTITY % release PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES Release Specification//EN" 
"release.ent">
 %release;
 <!ENTITY % devauto PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES Auto Generated Device 
Lists//EN" "nonexistent">
 %devauto;
 ]>
-<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"; 
xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"; version="5.0">
-  <info><title>&os; &release.current; Hardware Notes</title>
-    
+<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook";
+  xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"; version="5.0">
 
-    <author><orgname>The &os; Documentation Project</orgname></author>
+  <info>
+    <title>&os; &release.current; Hardware Notes</title>
+
+    <author>
+      <orgname>The &os; Documentation Project</orgname>
+    </author>
 
     <pubdate>$FreeBSD$</pubdate>
 
@@ -33,7 +37,8 @@
       <year>2015</year>
       <year>2016</year>
       <year>2017</year>
-      <holder role="mailto:[email protected]";>The &os; Documentation 
Project</holder>
+      <holder role="mailto:[email protected]";>The &os; Documentation
+       Project</holder>
     </copyright>
 
     <legalnotice xml:id="trademarks" role="trademarks">
@@ -112,8 +117,8 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-          <para>The single-core &intel; &xeon;
-            processors <quote>Nocona</quote>, <quote>Irwindale</quote>,
+         <para>The single-core &intel; &xeon; processors
+           <quote>Nocona</quote>, <quote>Irwindale</quote>,
            <quote>Potomac</quote>, and <quote>Cranford</quote> have
            EM64T support.</para>
        </listitem>
@@ -132,7 +137,8 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>All &intel; &centrino; Duo and &centrino; Pro platforms</para>
+         <para>All &intel; &centrino; Duo and &centrino; Pro
+           platforms</para>
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
@@ -142,11 +148,11 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>Some &intel; &pentium; 4s and &celeron; Ds using
-           the <quote>Prescott</quote> core have EM64T support.  See
-           the <link xlink:href="http://processorfinder.intel.com";>Intel
-           Processor Spec Finder</link> for the definitive answer about
-           EM64T support in Intel processors.</para>
+         <para>Some &intel; &pentium; 4s and &celeron; Ds using the
+           <quote>Prescott</quote> core have EM64T support.  See the
+           <link xlink:href="http://processorfinder.intel.com";>Intel
+             Processor Spec Finder</link> for the definitive answer
+           about EM64T support in Intel processors.</para>
        </listitem>
 
       </itemizedlist>
@@ -171,14 +177,14 @@
       <title>i386</title>
 
       <para>&os;/&arch.i386; runs on a wide variety of <quote>IBM PC
-         compatible</quote> machines. Due to the wide range of
+         compatible</quote> machines.  Due to the wide range of
        hardware available for this architecture, it is impossible
        to exhaustively list all combinations of equipment supported
        by &os;.  Nevertheless, some general guidelines are
        presented here.</para>
 
       <para>Almost all &i386;-compatible processors with a floating
-       point unit are supported. All &intel; processors beginning
+       point unit are supported.  All &intel; processors beginning
        with the 80486 are supported, including the 80486, &pentium;,
        &pentium; Pro, &pentium; II, &pentium; III, &pentium; 4, and
        variants thereof, such as the &xeon; and &celeron; processors.
@@ -248,11 +254,13 @@
        (DSDT) provided by each machine's BIOS.  Some machines have
        bad or incomplete DSDTs, which prevents ACPI from functioning
        correctly.  Replacement DSDTs for some machines can be found
-       at the <link 
xlink:href="http://acpi.sourceforge.net/dsdt/index.php";>DSDT</link>
-       section of the <link 
xlink:href="http://acpi.sourceforge.net/";>ACPI4Linux</link> project
-       Web site.  &os; can use these DSDTs to override the DSDT
-       provided by the BIOS; see the &man.acpi.4; manual page for
-       more information.</para>
+       at the <link
+         xlink:href="http://acpi.sourceforge.net/dsdt/index.php";>DSDT</link>
+       section of the <link
+         xlink:href="http://acpi.sourceforge.net/";>ACPI4Linux</link>
+       project Web site.  &os; can use these DSDTs to override the
+       DSDT provided by the BIOS; see the &man.acpi.4; manual page
+       for more information.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="proc-pc98">
@@ -287,8 +295,8 @@
     <sect2 xml:id="proc-powerpc">
       <title>powerpc</title>
 
-      <para>All Apple PowerPC machines with built-in USB are supported,
-       as well a limited selection of non-Apple machines,
+      <para>All Apple PowerPC machines with built-in USB are
+       supported, as well a limited selection of non-Apple machines,
        including KVM on POWER7</para>
 
       <para>SMP is supported on all systems with more than
@@ -299,8 +307,8 @@
       <title>sparc64</title>
 
       <para>This section describes the systems currently known to be
-       supported by &os; on the Fujitsu &sparc64; and Sun &ultrasparc;
-       platforms.</para>
+       supported by &os; on the Fujitsu &sparc64; and Sun
+       &ultrasparc; platforms.</para>
 
       <para>SMP is supported on all systems with more than 1
        processor.</para>
@@ -310,8 +318,8 @@
        supported by the &man.creator.4; (Sun Creator, Sun Creator3D
        and Sun Elite3D) or &man.machfb.4; (Sun PGX and Sun PGX64
        as well as the ATI Mach64 chips found onboard in for example
-       &sun.blade; 100, &sun.blade; 150, &sun.ultra; 5 and &sun.ultra; 10)
-       driver must use the serial console.</para>
+       &sun.blade; 100, &sun.blade; 150, &sun.ultra; 5 and
+       &sun.ultra; 10) driver must use the serial console.</para>
 
       <para>If you have a system that is not listed here, it may not
        have been tested with &os; &release.current;.  We encourage
@@ -456,10 +464,11 @@
       </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>The following systems are partially supported by &os;.  In
-       particular the fiber channel controllers in SBus-based systems are not
-       supported.  However, it is possible to use these with a SCSI controller
-       supported by the &man.esp.4; driver (Sun ESP SCSI, Sun FAS Fast-SCSI
-       and Sun FAS366 Fast-Wide SCSI controllers).</para>
+       particular the fiber channel controllers in SBus-based systems
+       are not supported.  However, it is possible to use these with
+       a SCSI controller supported by the &man.esp.4; driver (Sun ESP
+       SCSI, Sun FAS Fast-SCSI and Sun FAS366 Fast-Wide SCSI
+       controllers).</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
        <listitem>
@@ -471,9 +480,9 @@
        </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
-      <para>Starting with 7.2-RELEASE, &arch.sparc64; systems based on Sun
-       &ultrasparc; III and beyond are also supported by &os;, which includes
-       the following known working systems:</para>
+      <para>Starting with 7.2-RELEASE, &arch.sparc64; systems based on
+       Sun &ultrasparc; III and beyond are also supported by &os;,
+       which includes the following known working systems:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
        <listitem>
@@ -501,7 +510,8 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>&sun.fire; V215 (support first appeared in 7.3-RELEASE and 
8.1-RELEASE)</para>
+         <para>&sun.fire; V215 (support first appeared in 7.3-RELEASE
+           and 8.1-RELEASE)</para>
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
@@ -509,7 +519,8 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>&sun.fire; V245 (support first appeared in 7.3-RELEASE and 
8.1-RELEASE)</para>
+         <para>&sun.fire; V245 (support first appeared in 7.3-RELEASE
+           and 8.1-RELEASE)</para>
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
@@ -522,9 +533,10 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>&sun.fire; V480 (501-6780 and 501-6790 centerplanes only, for
-           which support first appeared in 7.3-RELEASE and 8.1-RELEASE,
-           other centerplanes might work beginning with 8.3-RELEASE and 
9.0-RELEASE)</para>
+         <para>&sun.fire; V480 (501-6780 and 501-6790 centerplanes
+           only, for which support first appeared in 7.3-RELEASE and
+           8.1-RELEASE, other centerplanes might work beginning with
+           8.3-RELEASE and 9.0-RELEASE)</para>
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
@@ -532,8 +544,9 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>&sun.fire; V890 (support first appeared in 7.4-RELEASE and 
8.1-RELEASE,
-           non-mixed &ultrasparc; IV/IV+ CPU-configurations only)</para>
+         <para>&sun.fire; V890 (support first appeared in 7.4-RELEASE
+           and 8.1-RELEASE, non-mixed &ultrasparc; IV/IV+
+           CPU-configurations only)</para>
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
@@ -550,14 +563,16 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>&sun.fire; V490 (support first appeared in 7.4-RELEASE and 
8.1-RELEASE,
-           non-mixed &ultrasparc; IV/IV+ CPU-configurations only)</para>
+         <para>&sun.fire; V490 (support first appeared in 7.4-RELEASE
+           and 8.1-RELEASE, non-mixed &ultrasparc; IV/IV+
+           CPU-configurations only)</para>
        </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
-      <para>Starting with 7.4-RELEASE and 8.1-RELEASE, &arch.sparc64; systems 
based on
-       Fujitsu &sparc64; V are also supported by &os;, which
-       includes the following known working systems:</para>
+      <para>Starting with 7.4-RELEASE and 8.1-RELEASE, &arch.sparc64;
+       systems based on Fujitsu &sparc64; V are also supported by
+       &os;, which includes the following known working
+       systems:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
        <listitem>
@@ -565,8 +580,8 @@
        </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
-      <para>The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested but
-       believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
+      <para>The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested
+       but believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
        <listitem>
@@ -682,7 +697,7 @@
 
       <note>
        <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;] Booting from these
-         controllers is supported. EISA adapters are not
+         controllers is supported.  EISA adapters are not
          supported.</para>
       </note>
 
@@ -712,7 +727,7 @@
 
       <note>
        <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;] Booting from these
-         controllers is supported. EISA adapters are not
+         controllers is supported.  EISA adapters are not
          supported.</para>
       </note>
 
@@ -765,8 +780,8 @@
        support CD-ROM commands are supported for read-only access by
        the CD-ROM drivers (such as &man.cd.4;).  WORM/CD-R/CD-RW
        writing support is provided by &man.cdrecord.1;, which is a
-       part of the <package>sysutils/cdrtools</package> port in the Ports
-       Collection.</para>
+       part of the <package>sysutils/cdrtools</package> port in the
+       Ports Collection.</para>
 
       <para>The following CD-ROM type systems are supported at this
        time:</para>
@@ -1020,8 +1035,8 @@
        4965AGN IEEE 802.11n PCI network adapters
        (&man.iwn.4; driver)</para>
 
-      <para>[&arch.i386;, &arch.amd64;] Marvell Libertas IEEE 802.11b/g
-        PCI network adapters (&man.malo.4; driver)</para>
+      <para>[&arch.i386;, &arch.amd64;] Marvell Libertas IEEE
+       802.11b/g PCI network adapters (&man.malo.4; driver)</para>
 
       <para>Marvell 88W8363 IEEE 802.11n wireless network
        adapters (&man.mwl.4; driver)</para>
@@ -1032,8 +1047,8 @@
 
       &hwlist.rsu;
 
-      <para>Realtek RTL8188CE based PCIe IEEE 802.11b/g/n wireless network
-       adapters (&man.rtwn.4; driver)</para>
+      <para>Realtek RTL8188CE based PCIe IEEE 802.11b/g/n wireless
+       network adapters (&man.rtwn.4; driver)</para>
 
       &hwlist.rum;
 
@@ -1147,12 +1162,13 @@
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;] Avlab Technology, PCI IO 2S
-           and PCI IO 4S</para>
+         <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;] Avlab Technology, PCI IO
+           2S and PCI IO 4S</para>
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
-         <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;] Comtrol RocketPort 550</para>
+         <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;] Comtrol RocketPort
+           550</para>
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
@@ -1222,7 +1238,7 @@
 
        <listitem>
          <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;] SIIG Cyber 4S PCI
-         16C550/16C650/16C850</para>
+           16C550/16C650/16C850</para>
        </listitem>
 
        <listitem>
@@ -1305,7 +1321,7 @@
 
       <note>
        <para>"flags 0x15000?01" is necessary in kernel
-       configuration.</para>
+         configuration.</para>
       </note>
 
       <para>[&arch.pc98;] Media Intelligent RSB-384 (&man.sio.4;
@@ -1453,8 +1469,9 @@
       </note>
 
       <note>
-       <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;]
-         USB Bluetooth adapters can be found in <link 
linkend="bluetooth">Bluetooth</link> section.</para>
+       <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;] USB Bluetooth
+         adapters can be found in <link
+           linkend="bluetooth">Bluetooth</link> section.</para>
       </note>
 
       &hwlist.ohci;
@@ -1576,7 +1593,8 @@
       <note>
        <para>Information regarding specific video cards and
          compatibility with <application>Xorg</application> can be
-         found at <uri 
xlink:href="http://www.x.org/";>http://www.x.org/</uri>.</para>
+         found at <uri
+           xlink:href="http://www.x.org/";>http://www.x.org/</uri>.</para>
       </note>
 
       <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;]
@@ -1631,7 +1649,8 @@
       <note>
        <para>&man.moused.8; has more information on using pointing
          devices with &os;.  Information on using pointing devices
-         with <application>Xorg</application> can be found at <uri 
xlink:href="http://www.x.org/";>http://www.x.org/</uri>.</para>
+         with <application>Xorg</application> can be found at <uri
+           xlink:href="http://www.x.org/";>http://www.x.org/</uri>.</para>
       </note>
 
       <para>[&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;] <quote>PC standard</quote>
@@ -1664,8 +1683,9 @@
       </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>[&arch.i386;] Xilinx XC6200-based reconfigurable hardware
-       cards compatible with the HOT1 from <link 
xlink:href="http://www.vcc.com/";>Virtual Computers</link> (xrpu
-       driver).</para>
+       cards compatible with the HOT1 from <link
+         xlink:href="http://www.vcc.com/";>Virtual Computers</link>
+       (xrpu driver).</para>
 
       <para>[&arch.pc98;] Power Management Controller of NEC PC-98
        Note (pmc driver)</para>

Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml    Thu May 18 
15:41:59 2017        (r318466)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml    Thu May 18 
16:24:10 2017        (r318467)
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
 <!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook XML V5.0-Based Extension//EN"
-        "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [
+       "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [
 <!ENTITY % release PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES Release Specification//EN" 
"release.ent">
  %release;
 ]>
-<!-- 
+<!--
      Local Variables:
      mode: sgml
      sgml-indent-data: t
@@ -12,9 +12,11 @@
      sgml-always-quote-attributes: t
      End:
 -->
-<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"; 
xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"; version="5.0">
-  <info><title>&os; &release.current; README</title>
-    
+<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook";
+  xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"; version="5.0">
+
+  <info>
+    <title>&os; &release.current; README</title>
 
     <author><orgname>The &os; Project</orgname></author>
 
@@ -37,7 +39,10 @@
       <year>2013</year>
       <year>2014</year>
       <year>2015</year>
-      <holder role="mailto:[email protected]";>The &os; Documentation 
Project</holder>
+      <year>2016</year>
+      <year>2017</year>
+      <holder role="mailto:[email protected]";>The &os; Documentation
+       Project</holder>
     </copyright>
 
     <legalnotice xml:id="trademarks" role="trademarks">
@@ -48,35 +53,36 @@
       &tm-attrib.general;
     </legalnotice>
 
-  <abstract>
-    <para>This document gives a brief introduction to &os;
-      &release.current;.  It includes some information on how to
-      obtain &os;, a listing of various ways to contact the &os;
-      Project, and pointers to some other sources of
-      information.</para>
-  </abstract>
+    <abstract>
+      <para>This document gives a brief introduction to &os;
+       &release.current;.  It includes some information on how to
+       obtain &os;, a listing of various ways to contact the &os;
+       Project, and pointers to some other sources of
+       information.</para>
+    </abstract>
   </info>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="intro">
     <title>Introduction</title>
 
-    <para>This distribution is a &release.type; of &os; &release.current;, the
-      latest point along the &release.branch; branch.</para>
+    <para>This distribution is a &release.type; of &os;
+      &release.current;, the latest point along the &release.branch;
+      branch.</para>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>About &os;</title>
 
       <para>&os; is an operating system based on 4.4 BSD Lite for
        AMD64 and Intel EM64T based PC hardware (&arch.amd64;),
-       Intel, AMD, Cyrix or NexGen <quote>x86</quote> based PC hardware 
(&arch.i386;),
-       NEC PC-9801/9821 series PCs and compatibles (&arch.pc98;),
-       and &ultrasparc; machines (&arch.sparc64;).  Versions
-       for the &arm; (&arch.arm;), &mips; (&arch.mips;), and
-       &powerpc; (&arch.powerpc;) architectures are currently under
-       development as well.  &os; works with a wide variety of
-       peripherals and configurations and can be used for everything
-       from software development to games to Internet Service
-       Provision.</para>
+       Intel, AMD, Cyrix or NexGen <quote>x86</quote> based PC
+       hardware (&arch.i386;), NEC PC-9801/9821 series PCs and
+       compatibles (&arch.pc98;), and &ultrasparc; machines
+       (&arch.sparc64;).  Versions for the &arm; (&arch.arm;), &mips;
+       (&arch.mips;), and &powerpc; (&arch.powerpc;) architectures
+       are currently under development as well.  &os; works with
+       a wide variety of peripherals and configurations and can be
+       used for everything from software development to games to
+       Internet Service Provision.</para>
 
       <para>This release of &os; contains everything you need to run
        such a system, including full source code for the kernel and
@@ -88,61 +94,63 @@
 
       <para>A large collection of third-party ported software (the
        <quote>Ports Collection</quote>) is also provided to make it
-       easy to obtain and install all your favorite traditional &unix;
-       utilities for &os;.  Each <quote>port</quote> consists of a
-       set of scripts to retrieve, configure, build, and install a
-       piece of software, with a single command.  Over &os.numports;
-       ports, from editors to programming languages to graphical
-       applications, make &os; a powerful and comprehensive operating
-       environment that extends far beyond what's provided by many
-       commercial versions of &unix;.  Most ports are also available as
-       pre-compiled <quote>packages</quote>, which can be quickly
-       installed from the installation program.</para>
+       easy to obtain and install all your favorite traditional
+       &unix; utilities for &os;.  Each <quote>port</quote> consists
+       of a set of scripts to retrieve, configure, build, and install
+       a piece of software, with a single command.  Over
+       &os.numports; ports, from editors to programming languages to
+       graphical applications, make &os; a powerful and comprehensive
+       operating environment that extends far beyond what's provided
+       by many commercial versions of &unix;.  Most ports are also
+       available as pre-compiled <quote>packages</quote>, which can
+       be quickly installed from the installation program.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Target Audience</title>
 
-      <para releasetype="current">This &release.type; is aimed primarily at 
early adopters
-       and various other users who want to get involved with the
-       ongoing development of &os;.  While the &os; development team
-       tries its best to ensure that each &release.type; works as
-       advertised, &release.branch; is very much a
-       work-in-progress.</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="current">The basic requirements for using this 
&release.type; are
-       technical proficiency with &os; and an understanding of the
-       ongoing development process of &os; &release.branch; (as
-       discussed on the &a.current;).</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="current">For those more interested in doing business 
with &os; than
-       in experimenting with new &os; technology, formal releases
-       (such as &release.prev.stable;) are frequently more appropriate.
-       Releases undergo a period of testing and quality assurance
-       checking to ensure high reliability and dependability.</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="snapshot">This &release.type; is aimed primarily at 
early adopters
-       and various other users who want to get involved with the
-       ongoing development of &os;.  While the &os; development team
-       tries its best to ensure that each &release.type; works as
-       advertised, &release.branch; is very much a
-       work-in-progress.</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="snapshot">The basic requirements for using this 
&release.type; are
-       technical proficiency with &os; and an understanding of the
-       ongoing development process of &os; &release.branch; (as
-       discussed on the &a.current;).</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="snapshot">For those more interested in doing business 
with &os; than
-       in experimenting with new &os; technology, formal releases
-       (such as &release.prev.stable;) are frequently more appropriate.
-       Releases undergo a period of testing and quality assurance
-       checking to ensure high reliability and dependability.</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="release">This &release.type; of &os; is suitable for 
all users.  It
-       has undergone a period of testing and quality assurance
-       checking to ensure the highest reliability and
-       dependability.</para>
+      <para releasetype="current">This &release.type; is aimed
+       primarily at early adopters and various other users who want
+       to get involved with the ongoing development of &os;.  While
+       the &os; development team tries its best to ensure that each
+       &release.type; works as advertised, &release.branch; is very
+       much a work-in-progress.</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="current">The basic requirements for using
+       this &release.type; are technical proficiency with &os; and an
+       understanding of the ongoing development process of &os;
+       &release.branch; (as discussed on the &a.current;).</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="current">For those more interested in doing
+       business with &os; than in experimenting with new &os;
+       technology, formal releases (such as &release.prev.stable;)
+       are frequently more appropriate.  Releases undergo a period of
+       testing and quality assurance checking to ensure high
+       reliability and dependability.</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="snapshot">This &release.type; is aimed
+       primarily at early adopters and various other users who want
+       to get involved with the ongoing development of &os;.  While
+       the &os; development team tries its best to ensure that each
+       &release.type; works as advertised, &release.branch; is very
+       much a work-in-progress.</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="snapshot">The basic requirements for using
+       this &release.type; are technical proficiency with &os; and an
+       understanding of the ongoing development process of &os;
+       &release.branch; (as discussed on the &a.current;).</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="snapshot">For those more interested in doing
+       business with &os; than in experimenting with new &os;
+       technology, formal releases (such as &release.prev.stable;)
+       are frequently more appropriate.  Releases undergo a period of
+       testing and quality assurance checking to ensure high
+       reliability and dependability.</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="release">This &release.type; of &os; is
+       suitable for all users.  It has undergone a period of testing
+       and quality assurance checking to ensure the highest
+       reliability and dependability.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -166,16 +174,18 @@
        Collection, or other extra material.</para>
 
       <para>A list of the CDROM and DVD publishers known to the
-       project are listed in the <link 
xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/mirrors.html"><quote>Obtaining
-       &os;</quote></link> appendix to the Handbook.</para>
+       project are listed in the <link
+         xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/mirrors.html"><quote>Obtaining
+           &os;</quote></link> appendix to the Handbook.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>FTP</title>
 
       <para>You can use FTP to retrieve &os; and any or all of its
-       optional packages from <uri 
xlink:href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/";>ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/</uri>, which is the 
official
-       &os; release site, or any of its
+       optional packages from <uri
+         xlink:href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/";>ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/</uri>,
+       which is the official &os; release site, or any of its
        <quote>mirrors</quote>.</para>
 
       <para>Lists of locations that mirror &os; can be found in the
@@ -187,8 +197,9 @@
       <para>Additional mirror sites are always welcome.  Contact
        <email>[email protected]</email> for more details on
        becoming an official mirror site.  You can also find useful
-        information for mirror sites at the <link 
xlink:href="&url.articles.hubs;/">Mirroring
-        &os;</link> article.</para>
+       information for mirror sites at the <link
+         xlink:href="&url.articles.hubs;/">Mirroring &os;</link>
+       article.</para>
 
       <para>Mirrors generally contain the ISO images generally used to
        create a CDROM of a &os; release.  They usually also contain
@@ -208,16 +219,18 @@
       <para>For any questions or general technical support issues,
        please send mail to the &a.questions;.</para>
 
-      <para>If you're tracking the &release.branch; development efforts, you
-       <emphasis>must</emphasis> join the &a.current;, in order to
-       keep abreast of recent developments and changes that may
-       affect the way you use and maintain the system.</para>
-
-      <para>Being a largely-volunteer effort, the &os;
-       Project is always happy to have extra hands willing to help&mdash;there 
are already far more desired enhancements than
-       there is time to implement them.  To contact the developers on
-       technical matters, or with offers of help, please send mail to
-       the &a.hackers;.</para>
+      <para>If you're tracking the &release.branch; development
+       efforts, you <emphasis>must</emphasis> join the &a.current;,
+       in order to keep abreast of recent developments and changes
+       that may affect the way you use and maintain the
+       system.</para>
+
+      <para>Being a largely-volunteer effort, the &os; Project is
+       always happy to have extra hands willing to help&mdash;there
+       are already far more desired enhancements than there is time
+       to implement them.  To contact the developers on technical
+       matters, or with offers of help, please send mail to the
+       &a.hackers;.</para>
 
       <para>Please note that these mailing lists can experience
        <emphasis>significant</emphasis> amounts of traffic.  If you
@@ -226,13 +239,15 @@
        preferable to subscribe instead to the &a.announce;.</para>
 
       <para>All of the mailing lists can be freely joined by anyone
-       wishing to do so.  Visit the <link 
xlink:href="&url.base;/mailman/listinfo">
-       &os; Mailman Info Page</link>.  This will give you more
-       information on joining the various lists, accessing archives,
-       etc.  There are a number of mailing lists targeted at special
-       interest groups not mentioned here; more information can be
-       obtained either from the Mailman pages or the <link 
xlink:href="&url.base;/support.html#mailing-list">mailing
-       lists section</link> of the &os; Web site.</para>
+       wishing to do so.  Visit the <link
+         xlink:href="&url.base;/mailman/listinfo">&os; Mailman Info
+         Page</link>.  This will give you more information on joining
+       the various lists, accessing archives, etc.  There are
+       a number of mailing lists targeted at special interest groups
+       not mentioned here; more information can be obtained either
+       from the Mailman pages or the <link
+         xlink:href="&url.base;/support.html#mailing-list">mailing
+         lists section</link> of the &os; Web site.</para>
 
       <important>
        <para>Do <emphasis>not</emphasis> send email to the lists
@@ -286,48 +301,48 @@
        provided in various formats.  Most distributions will include
        both ASCII text (<filename>.TXT</filename>) and HTML
        (<filename>.HTM</filename>) renditions.  Some distributions
-       may also include other formats such as Portable Document Format
-       (<filename>.PDF</filename>).
+       may also include other formats such as Portable Document
+       Format (<filename>.PDF</filename>).</para>
 
-       <itemizedlist>
-         <listitem>
-           <para><filename>README.TXT</filename>: This file, which
-             gives some general information about &os; as well as
-             some cursory notes about obtaining a
-             distribution.</para>
-         </listitem>
-
-         <listitem>
-           <para><filename>RELNOTES.TXT</filename>: The release
-             notes, showing what's new and different in &os;
-             &release.current; compared to the previous release (&os;
-             &release.prev;).</para>
-         </listitem>
-
-         <listitem>
-           <para><filename>HARDWARE.TXT</filename>: The hardware
-             compatibility list, showing devices with which &os; has
-             been tested and is known to work.</para>
-         </listitem>
-
-         <listitem>
-           <para><filename>ERRATA.TXT</filename>: Release errata.
-             Late-breaking, post-release information can be found in
-             this file, which is principally applicable to releases
-             (as opposed to snapshots).  It is important to consult
-             this file before installing a release of &os;, as it
-             contains the latest information on problems which have
-             been found and fixed since the release was
-             created.</para>
-         </listitem>
-       </itemizedlist>
-      </para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+       <listitem>
+         <para><filename>README.TXT</filename>: This file, which
+           gives some general information about &os; as well as
+           some cursory notes about obtaining a
+           distribution.</para>
+       </listitem>
+
+       <listitem>
+         <para><filename>RELNOTES.TXT</filename>: The release
+           notes, showing what's new and different in &os;
+           &release.current; compared to the previous release (&os;
+           &release.prev;).</para>
+       </listitem>
+
+       <listitem>
+         <para><filename>HARDWARE.TXT</filename>: The hardware
+           compatibility list, showing devices with which &os; has
+           been tested and is known to work.</para>
+       </listitem>
+
+       <listitem>
+         <para><filename>ERRATA.TXT</filename>: Release errata.
+           Late-breaking, post-release information can be found in
+           this file, which is principally applicable to releases
+           (as opposed to snapshots).  It is important to consult
+           this file before installing a release of &os;, as it
+           contains the latest information on problems which have
+           been found and fixed since the release was
+           created.</para>
+       </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>On platforms that support &man.bsdinstall.8; (currently
-       &arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;, and &arch.sparc64;), these 
documents are generally available via the
-       Documentation menu during installation.  Once the system is
-       installed, you can revisit this menu by re-running the
-       &man.bsdinstall.8; utility.</para>
+       &arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.pc98;, and &arch.sparc64;),
+       these documents are generally available via the Documentation
+       menu during installation.  Once the system is installed, you
+       can revisit this menu by re-running the &man.bsdinstall.8;
+       utility.</para>
 
       <note>
        <para>It is extremely important to read the errata for any
@@ -338,8 +353,9 @@
          other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be
          consulted as the <quote>current errata</quote> for this
          release.  These other copies of the errata are located at
-         <uri xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/">&url.base;/releases/</uri> (as
-         well as any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this
+         <uri
+           xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/">&url.base;/releases/</uri>
+         (as well as any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this
          location).</para>
       </note>
     </sect2>
@@ -347,18 +363,19 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Manual Pages</title>
 
-      <para>As with almost all &unix; like operating systems, &os; comes
-       with a set of on-line manual pages, accessed through the
-       &man.man.1; command or through the <link 
xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi";>hypertext manual
-       pages gateway</link> on the &os; Web site.  In general, the
-       manual pages provide information on the different commands and
-       APIs available to the &os; user.</para>
+      <para>As with almost all &unix; like operating systems, &os;
+       comes with a set of on-line manual pages, accessed through the
+       &man.man.1; command or through the <link
+         xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi";>hypertext
+         manual pages gateway</link> on the &os; Web site.  In
+       general, the manual pages provide information on the different
+       commands and APIs available to the &os; user.</para>
 
       <para>In some cases, manual pages are written to give
        information on particular topics.  Notable examples of such
-       manual pages are &man.tuning.7; (a guide to performance tuning),
-       &man.security.7; (an introduction to &os; security), and
-       &man.style.9; (a style guide to kernel coding).</para>
+       manual pages are &man.tuning.7; (a guide to performance
+       tuning), &man.security.7; (an introduction to &os; security),
+       and &man.style.9; (a style guide to kernel coding).</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
@@ -366,31 +383,34 @@
 
       <para>Two highly-useful collections of &os;-related information,
        maintained by the &os; Project,
-       are the &os; Handbook and &os; FAQ (Frequently Asked
-       Questions document).  On-line versions of the <link 
xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/">Handbook</link>
-       and <link xlink:href="&url.books.faq;/">FAQ</link>
-       are always available from the <link 
xlink:href="&url.base;/docs.html">&os; Documentation
-       page</link> or its mirrors.  If you install the
+       are the &os; Handbook and &os; FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions
+       document).  On-line versions of the <link
+         xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/">Handbook</link> and <link
+         xlink:href="&url.books.faq;/">FAQ</link> are always
+       available from the <link
+         xlink:href="&url.base;/docs.html">&os; Documentation
+         page</link> or its mirrors.  If you install the
        <filename>doc</filename> distribution set, you can use a Web
        browser to read the Handbook and FAQ locally.  In particular,
        note that the Handbook contains a step-by-step guide to
        installing &os;.</para>
 
       <para>A number of on-line books and articles, also maintained by
-        the &os; Project, cover more-specialized, &os;-related topics.
-        This material spans a wide range of topics, from effective use
-        of the mailing lists, to dual-booting &os; with other
-        operating systems, to guidelines for new committers.  Like the
-        Handbook and FAQ, these documents are available from the &os;
-        Documentation Page or in the <filename>doc</filename>
-        distribution set.</para>
+       the &os; Project, cover more-specialized, &os;-related topics.
+       This material spans a wide range of topics, from effective use
+       of the mailing lists, to dual-booting &os; with other
+       operating systems, to guidelines for new committers.  Like the
+       Handbook and FAQ, these documents are available from the &os;
+       Documentation Page or in the <filename>doc</filename>
+       distribution set.</para>
 
       <para>A listing of other books and documents about &os; can be
-        found in the <link 
xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/bibliography.html">bibliography</link>
-        of the &os; Handbook.  Because of &os;'s strong &unix; heritage,
-        many other articles and books written for &unix; systems are
-        applicable as well, some of which are also listed in the
-        bibliography.</para>
+       found in the <link
+         
xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/bibliography.html">bibliography</link>
+       of the &os; Handbook.  Because of &os;'s strong &unix;
+       heritage, many other articles and books written for &unix;
+       systems are applicable as well, some of which are also listed
+       in the bibliography.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -399,10 +419,11 @@
 
     <para>&os; represents the cumulative work of many hundreds, if not
       thousands, of individuals from around the world who have worked
-      countless hours to bring about this &release.type;.  For a
-      complete list of &os; developers and contributors, please see
-      <link xlink:href="&url.articles.contributors;/"><quote>Contributors
-      to &os;</quote></link> on the &os; Web site or any of its
+      countless hours to bring about this &release.type;.  For
+      a complete list of &os; developers and contributors, please see
+      <link
+       xlink:href="&url.articles.contributors;/"><quote>Contributors
+         to &os;</quote></link> on the &os; Web site or any of its
       mirrors.</para>
 
     <para>Special thanks also go to the many thousands of &os; users
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