Author: gjb
Date: Fri May 19 18:07:28 2017
New Revision: 318547
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318547
Log:
Fix a few grammar and ambiguity nits.
Submitted by: adamw
Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation
Modified:
stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Fri May 19
17:14:29 2017 (r318546)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Fri May 19
18:07:28 2017 (r318547)
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@
<acronym>NAT-T</acronym> configuration. The
<literal>-g</literal> and <literal>-t</literal> flags have
been added, which list only global and virtual policies,
- respectively when used with the <literal>-D</literal> and
+ respectively, when used with the <literal>-D</literal> and
<literal>-P</literal> flags.</para>
<para revision="316098" contrib="sponsor"
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
<para revision="317855">The &man.daemon.8; utility has been
updated to allow redirecting &man.stdout.4; and &man.stderr.4;
- output to &man.syslog.3; and to a file.</para>
+ output to &man.syslog.3; or to a file.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 xml:id="userland-contrib">
@@ -307,8 +307,8 @@
sponsor="&ff;">&man.blacklistd.8; support for
<application>OpenSSH</application> has been refined to adjust
notification points to catch all authentication failures
- rather than authentication failures caused by invalid
- login usernames.</para>
+ rather than only those caused by invalid login
+ usernames.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 xml:id="userland-installer">
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