Hi!

On 7/27/20 6:41 PM, Rodney W. Grimes wrote:
Author: 0mp (doc,ports committer)
Date: Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020
New Revision: 363598
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/363598

Log:
   nologin.8: Improve wording
I disagree that this improves wording.  The norm of action for
"logging" in Unix is to "write to syslog", not "log to syslog".

Hmm, I agree, but here it is "log using syslog".

Have you got any idea how to further improve this sentence?

   Reported by: yuripv
   Reviewed by: bcr, yuripv
   MFC after:   3 days
   Differential Revision:       https://reviews.freebsd.org/D25814

Modified:
   head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8

Modified: head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8
==============================================================================
--- head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8     Mon Jul 27 09:10:02 2020        
(r363597)
+++ head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8     Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020        
(r363598)
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ have been disabled.
  .Pp
  When executed,
  .Nm
-first writes about the login attempt to
+first logs about the login attempt using
  .Xr syslog 3
  and then displays a message that an account is not available.
  .Pp

Cheers!

Mateusz Piotrowski

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