Author: ngie
Date: Thu Jan 24 20:35:58 2019
New Revision: 343412
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/343412

Log:
  Fix a typo/wordsmith a description modified in r343407
  
  r343407 accidentally introduced a typo (folling -> following). While
  reading the change out loud, I realized that the original sentence was
  wordy. almost sounding like a run-on sentence.
  
  Improve the flow by splitting up the two thoughts into two distinct sentence
  fragments.
  
  PR:           194547, 208497
  Reviewed by:  emaste
  Approved by:  emaste (mentor)
  MFC after:    1 month
  MFC with:     r343407
  Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D18947

Modified:
  head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh

Modified: head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh
==============================================================================
--- head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh      Thu Jan 24 18:51:15 
2019        (r343411)
+++ head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh      Thu Jan 24 20:35:58 
2019        (r343412)
@@ -1959,8 +1959,9 @@ fetch_create_manifest () {
        # Report to the user if any updates were avoided due to local changes
        if [ -s modifiedfiles ]; then
                cat - modifiedfiles <<- EOF | ${PAGER}
-                       The folling files are affected by updates but no 
changes have
-                       been downloaded because the files have been modified 
locally:
+                       The following files are affected by updates. No changes 
have
+                       been downloaded, however, because the files have been 
modified
+                       locally:
                EOF
        fi
        rm modifiedfiles
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