svn commit: r778170 - /forrest/trunk/site-author/content/xdocs/index.xml

[crossley]

Author: crossley
Date: Sun May 24 15:06:36 2009
New Revision: 778170

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=778170&view=rev
Log:
Tweak the concise description, to align with best practice for trademarks.
Thanks to assistance from Apache PRC.
Issue: FOR-1171

Modified:
    forrest/trunk/site-author/content/xdocs/index.xml

Modified: forrest/trunk/site-author/content/xdocs/index.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/forrest/trunk/site-author/content/xdocs/index.xml?rev=778170&r1=778169&r2=778170&view=diff
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--- forrest/trunk/site-author/content/xdocs/index.xml (original)
+++ forrest/trunk/site-author/content/xdocs/index.xml Sun May 24 15:06:36 2009
@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@
   <header>
     <title>Welcome to Apache Forrest</title>
     <abstract>
-      Apache Forrest&trade; is a publishing framework that transforms input 
from
+      Apache Forrest&trade; software is a publishing framework that transforms 
input from
       various sources into a unified presentation in one or more output 
formats.
-      The modular and extensible plugin architecture is based on Apache Cocoon
-      and relevant standards, which separates presentation from content. 
Forrest
+      The modular and extensible plug-in architecture of Apache Forrest is 
based on Apache Cocoon
+      and the relevant industry standards that separate presentation from 
content. Forrest
       can generate static documents, or be used as a dynamic server, or be
       deployed by its automated facility.
     </abstract>