Hi guys,
This is more of a general comment rather than targeted at this
particular change. Sorry if I missed any previous discussion on that matter.
I think it's good to have consistent headings without skipping levels.
Yet <h2> in the Javadoc comments does not seem right. Let's take a look
at JTable for example:
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/docs.webrev2/docs/api/java.desktop/javax/swing/JTable.html
The page starts with <h2>JTable</h2>. This is the highest heading level
on the page, I haven't found any <h1>.
Later on, <h3>Method Detail</h3>. And a specific method:
<h4>doLayout</h4>. Since the entire method description is under <h4>
heading, it should not use any headings above <h4>. But now we have <h2>
and <h3> which kind-of start new sections rather than being part of <h4>
which describes the method.
Is such heading sequence intended?
Regards,
Alexey
On 13/03/2019 06:10, Prasanta Sadhukhan wrote:
Any more comments on this
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/webrev.2/
Regards
Prasanta
On 11-Mar-19 2:16 PM, Prasanta Sadhukhan wrote:
The 2nd URL is based on webrev.1. I have placed new docs for webrev.2
here
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/docs.webrev2/docs/api/java.desktop/module-summary.html
Regards
Prasanta
On 10-Mar-19 9:17 PM, Jonathan Gibbons wrote:
If it helps, I have a utility to extract headers from an API bundle,
that can generate a new bundle showing just the headers for each
page, and their metadata. I'll run that on the two bundles you list
below, and post the new URLs here.
-- Jon
On 3/9/19 10:59 PM, Philip Race wrote:
It might have been intentional but I think it is wrong.
It is useful to look at the old :
https://docs.oracle.com/en/java/javase/11/docs/api/java.desktop/module-summary.html
and the new :
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/docs/api/java.desktop/module-summary.html
to compare.
What was H3 is in italics and what follows in regular style is
intended
to be a sub-section.
-phil.
On 3/10/19, 9:30 AM, Sergey Bylokhov wrote:
When I check the first version, I thought it was intentional change.
https://docs.oracle.com/en/java/javase/11/docs/api/java.desktop/javax/print/attribute/package-summary.html
All of them looks similar headers described something about
attributes:
1. <h4><a id="role"></a>Attribute Roles</h4>
2. <h3>Attribute Sets</h3>
Why the first uses <h4> and the second uses <h3>?
On 09/03/2019 01:54, Prasanta Sadhukhan wrote:
Thanks Jon for the pointer. I have modified that file
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/webrev.2/
Any more comments?
Regards
Prasanta
On 09-Mar-19 2:24 AM, Jonathan Gibbons wrote:
Prasanta,
You should double check this file:
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/webrev.1/src/java.desktop/share/classes/javax/print/attribute/package-info.java.udiff.html
Previously, it was a mixture of <h3> and <h4>, suggesting that
the <h4> were subheadings of the enclosing logical <h3>
section. Now, you have changed them all to <h2>, meaning that
now they are all equivalent headings.
-- Jon
On 3/8/19 7:09 AM, Prasanta Sadhukhan wrote:
Hi Phil,
On 08-Mar-19 9:17 AM, Philip Race wrote:
Apart from making sure all the files are fixed there are two
things to look for :
1) If by moving a heading up from H3 to H2 you've now created
a similar error
because there is now no H3 before an H4. To be sure of this I
think you'd
need to run Jon's tool - how did you verify it ?
I missed one case in TextAttribute which I rectified
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/webrev.1/
It will be good to have Jon's tool so cc-ed him...
2) If in a case like UIManager where you've moved some
subsequent headings
up from H3 to H2 to match the new size at the reported error
site , would it
have been better visually to leave them as H3 ? ... probably
not .. but if there
were generated doc for us to look at posted that would be
easier to tell.
I am using make docs to verify and the docs output can be found at
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/docs/api/java.desktop/module-summary.html
Regards
Prasanta
-phil.
On 3/8/19, 3:37 AM, Sergey Bylokhov wrote:
Looks fine.
On 07/03/2019 03:37, Prasanta Sadhukhan wrote:
Hi All,
Bug: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8220250
webrev:
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~psadhukhan/8220250/webrev.0/
Please review a doc fix to fix heading style to improve the
accessibility JDK API documentation of java.desktop module.
Main approach taken for fixing heading style are:
- headings in documentation comments for modules, packages
and types should start at <h2> - Headings should be
hierarchical, and without ascending gaps, so <h1> should be
followed by <h2>, <h2> should be followed by <h3> or another
<h2> Regards Prasanta