Hi Folks, I've reviewed all of the inputs and have submitted ver-02 of the syslog-syslog draft. The real diffs was going to be very messy so I've summarized. Please review this and give me any additional feedback. Thanks, Chris [EMAIL PROTECTED] for direct responses =================================================================== Abstract No change. --- Section 1 - Introduction No Change --- Section 2 - Transport Layer Protocol No Change --- Section 3 - Distributed this into subsections and added more throughout. syslog-syslog-01 was: 3 - Packet Format and Contents 3.1 - The Priority Value: Facility and Severity 3.2 - Message Conveyance syslog-syslog-02 is: 3 - Packet Format and Contents 3.1 - Priority Field 3.2 - The Priority Value: Facility and Severity 3.3 - Message Field 3.4 - Examples This was annotated to indicate desirable and undesirable forms. 3.5 - Message Conveyance --- Section 4 - Conventions 4.1 - Date and Time Added comments and more examples about the traditional format. 4.2 - Domain Name and Address Added comments that both should be included if available. 4.3 - Originating Process Information Added comments about formatting a message with an immaterial process id. --- Section 5 - Security Considerations No Change --- Section 6 - Conclusion -became- Conclusion and Other Efforts I added a paragraph to point to the ULM BoF at the Fortieth IETF and suggested that implementers consult that for pointers. --- Section 7 - Acks Added some more names and a Thank-ee to Eric Allman.
