Um The three syslog layer definitions look good to me, but the five that come after do not seem quite to fit
' o An "originator" generates syslog content to be carried in a message. o A "collector" gathers syslog content for further analysis.' >From the earlier definition, I think the syslog application layer receives syslog content and generates syslog message, as opposed to generating syslog content. ' o A "transport sender" passes syslog messages to a specific transport protocol o A "transport receiver" takes syslog messages from a specific transport protocol.' Again, from the earlier definition of putting messages on the wire, I think that sender and receiver pass to and take from the wire using a specific protocol. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Chris Lonvick" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Sent: Wednesday, June 13, 2007 4:55 PM Subject: [Syslog] New -protocol document - your comments needed by 25 June > Hi Folks, > > I'm going to ask that people review the new -protocol document. > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-syslog-protocol-21.txt > > I'd like to get that back to Sam by the 25th. I'm not sure that this will > need another IETF Last Call but I'll discuss that with Sam. > > I want to be clear, the comments I'm looking for are those about the > changes made to the document from the last IETF Last Call. The vast > majority of the normative sections of the document have been accepted by > the WG and by the IETF. We will not be making any changes to those > sections. > > Thanks, > Chris > > _______________________________________________ > Syslog mailing list > Syslog@lists.ietf.org > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/syslog _______________________________________________ Syslog mailing list Syslog@lists.ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/syslog