Hi,

the last sentence 
"application can also include an APPNAME SDE [RFCPROT] 
application." is missing some text from what I proposed.
"application can also include an APPNAME SDE in the message 
identifying itself as the "foobar" application."

You can simplify this:
 "application can also include an APPNAME Structured Data Element
[RFCPROT]."

dbh

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Glenn M. Keeni [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] 
> Sent: Monday, November 12, 2007 1:41 AM
> To: David Harrington
> Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Subject: Re: [Syslog] WGLC: draft-ietf-syslog-tc-mib-02
> 
> David,
>      Thanks for the text. I have done some minor editorial
> changes and word-smithing to fit it into the context. It
> reads as follows:
> 
> For interoperability and backwards compatibility reasons,
> the mapping specified in this document between a label
> which represents a Facility or a Severity, and the value
> which represents the corresponding code, is normative.
> So the mapping from a label configured by operators in
> syslog.conf or equivalent will consistently map to the
> same Facility code regardless of implementation, but
> the label itself is often semantically meaningless,
> because it is impractical to attempt to enumerate all
> possible facilities, and the mapping (label and
> corresponding value) that is used for an actual facility
> is, and has historically been, implementation-dependent.
> 
> For example, the foobar application might log messages
> as having come from local7, even though there is no
> "local" process on the device, and the operator can
> configure syslog.conf to have local7.critical messages
> be relayed, even though there might be multiple facilities
> using Facility local7. This is typical current practice,
> and originators, relays and collectors know how to handle
> this situation. For improved accuracy, the foobar
> application can also include an APPNAME SDE [RFCPROT]
> application.
> 
> Let me know if I have missed something. I will put into
> the draft and send it off on 14/11/2007.
> 
> Glenn
> 
> David Harrington wrote:
> > Hi,
> > 
> > Please append the following paragraphs to section 2 
> "Background", and
> > please add these paragraphs to the comment text in the MIB 
> itself that
> > describe "Textual Conventions". A reference should be added in the
> > section 2 text for the APPNAME SDE with a pointer to the protocol
> > document.
> > 
> > "For interoperability and backwards compatibility reasons, 
> the values
> > and 
> > labels are normative, so the mapping from a label configured by
> > operators 
> > in syslog.conf or equivalent consistently maps to the same
Facility
> > number 
> > regardless of implementation, but the label itself is often
> > semantically 
> > meaningless, because there are not enough numbers to cover all
> > possible 
> > facilities, and the enumeration (label and value) that is 
> used by an 
> > actual facility is, and has historically been,
> > implementation-dependent.
> > 
> > For example, the foobar application might log messages as 
> having come
> > from 
> > local7, even though there is no "local" process on the 
> device, and the
> > 
> > operator can configure syslog.conf to have local7.critical 
> messages be
> > 
> > relayed, even though there might be multiple facilities 
> using Facility
> > 
> > local7.  This is typical current practice, and originators, 
> relays and
> > 
> > collectors know how to handle this situation.  For improved 
> accuracy,
> > the 
> > foobar application can also include an APPNAME SDE in the message 
> > identifying itself as the "foobar" application."
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > David Harrington
> > [EMAIL PROTECTED]
> > [EMAIL PROTECTED]
> > 
> > 
> > 
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