Hi, [email protected] wrote (07 Apr 2013 20:25:12 GMT) : >> doc/first_steps/bug_reporting >> ============================= >> >> describing screenshot content? >> ------------------------------ >> >> under "Write the report", the 5 bullet points add nothing useful to >> the screenshot and can be removed (or moved to a "alt" attribute). [...] > Removed the screenshot in favor of the text with feeb3cb.
Great, but the comment was about the text and screenshot under "Write the report". I guess this screenshot could go away too, then? >> same situation with not-strictly-necessary text and alt-text: "Once >> your email has been sent correctly ..." > I'm not sure I understood that part of the comment. This was yet another suggestion to avoid duplicating info between the screenshot and the text. I see you fixed this by removing the screenshot :) >> How to write a useful bug report >> -------------------------------- > [...] > Tried something with 8dcae06. But that's only 45 % of the original word > count :) Jokes apart, that can surely be improved, and ideas are welcome. Looks like a very good start to me! > If we cannot agree on an external resource to link about good password > practices I propose to create a ticket for that (ie. for finding a link, > not writing the doc). I've no such link in mind. Anyone? >> i find the use of bold text in the intro section to be distracting, >> though i understand the motivation. if used generally as a house >> style, i don't really object, but i don't recall that it is, and my >> personal reaction is that it is not a plus. > I use bold in text to make it scannable. > See http://www.nngroup.com/articles/how-users-read-on-the-web/. > But I agree that can also add distraction, and I'm surely not an expert > on that technique. I've already been using it, for example in: > https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/persistence/warnings/ > https://tails.boum.org/doc/about/fingerprint/ > Do you feel the same issue affect those pages too? I'm just the messenger, so I suggest you ask velope on #tails :) > In the case of KeepassX, the three things in bold are three strong > arguments in favor of KeepassX. They could also be presented as a dotted > list. For example: > [...] > Would that be an improvement? Personally, I like it the way it currently is. To end with, I suggest you point velope @ #tails to the changes you made, and see if they're happy with them :) Cheers, -- intrigeri | GnuPG key @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/intrigeri.asc | OTR fingerprint @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/otr.asc _______________________________________________ tails-dev mailing list [email protected] https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-dev
