On 11/04/13 10:39, intrigeri wrote:
> Hi,
>
> kolohe wrote (10 Apr 2013 17:51:41 GMT) :
>> Everything removed in this reply was changed.
>
> :)
>
>>> - The Markdown of the bullet list in step 4 is still buggy. I'm sorry
>>> I should have made it clear that the single quotes I wrote against
>>> every bullet point was here only to delimit what I was suggesting,
>>> but should not have been pasted as is.
>
>> I removed the single quotes. Is it working properly now?
>
> Yes.
>
>>> - step 6 ("Reboot your Mac") seems awkward to me, as we just
>>> redirected the user to the "start Tails" section on the download
>>> page, so they're facing contradictory information at this point.
>>> Perhaps the Mac-specific bits of step 6 should be integrated into
>>> the download page's step 6 somehow?
>>>
>
>> I combined the Reboot your Mac and "start Tails" into the div
>> class="next". Is that good?
>
> Looks good to me.
>
> Congrats!
>
> I've merged your branch into the `doc/manual_usb_installation/mac' one
> in our main Git repository, and pushed a few minor fixes on top of it.
>
> sajolida, may you please have a look and merge if you're happy
> with it?
>
> (ticket: todo/document_USB_boot_for_Intel_Mac)I had a look at the new doc. I'm glad we found a solution for that! I did many little changes that ended up being a mess to commit nicely. So that's commit a6a9ae3..c49fcc1. Sorry for the blob. While I was at it I also improved a bit the style of the Linux documentation. If you're fine with that I'll merge it into master, unfuzz what I can in the translations, and notify the translators.
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