On 15/09/13 20:11, intrigeri wrote: > I'm not very happy with how the tails_does_not_start/#entirely flow is > after my addition, but I am unsure how it could be improved.
If we believe the same error message is printed out when the "live-media=removable" trick needs to be used then we can described them at the beginning of a step 5: « if the error message is "xxx" then, try to remove the live-media=removable option. » That might add a bit of structure. But otherwise the current flow is fine with me. > Doc writers, please review and suggest improvements if needed :) Great. I did some minor rephrasing. The caution warning is a very long sentence but I didn't find a good and quick solution to split it.
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