I sent this to tails-dev, but forgot to put you in Cc. On 16/09/13 21:27, [email protected] wrote: > I had a look at the work done on the doc/cold-boot-attack branch. I'm > very happy to see new people taking initiatives regarding the > documentation lately. I pushed it to the main repo. > > Regarding the structure, I felt that it was talking about two things > that could be better separated or advertised: > > - memory wipe on shutdown > - emergency shutdown > > I'd be tempted to move the emergency shutdown to the "First steps" > section. And rename that page "Memory wipe on shutdown" and still have > it in the "Advanced topics" section. What do you think? > > Regarding formatting: > > - The link to cold-boot attack on Wikipedia is broken. > - I'd add a link to Wikipedia on the first occurrence of "RAM". > - I'd use a class="bug" section when mentioning the emergency > shutdown bug after using Tails USB Installer. > > Regarding terminology: > > - I'd say "RAM" instead of "the RAM". > - Don't use "junk", "random data" might do the trick instead. > - Please use a spell checker on your pages before pushing them! > with Vim do `:set spell spelllang=en`. > > Does that make sense?
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