emmapeel: > intrigeri: >> >> Yay! >> >> Here are a few initial comments to keep the ball rolling: >> > Hello: > > Thanks for the suggestions. The branch has been updated. Any other > suggestions? > > BitingBird, sajolida?
It looks good! Maybe I would: * Also mention improvements to the website (other than documentation. Its structure, graphic design, other sections, etc.). * Replace 'wiki' by 'website'. I understand from working with new contributors that it's weird to call our website a wiki when it's not really one (from a contributor's perspective). So I think we should progressively stop using the term 'wiki'. * Always beware of 'it'. I think you last bullet point would have been clearer for me you said "When releasing a new Tails, the branch the release was built from (stable or testing)." * Rephrase "Translations added to the website" into "Translations of the website" would save you a word :) Other than that, I'd merge it. -- sajolida _______________________________________________ Tails-dev mailing list [email protected] https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-dev To unsubscribe from this list, send an empty email to [email protected].
