Agreed, these both look ready to go! Just a few minor typographical nits below;
these could be cleaned up later.
Best,
Tommy
Usage Draft:
- In Section 3.1, the style of most items is lower case without underscores;
however there are "USER TIMEOUT event:” and "ERROR_REPORT event:”, and then the
rest of the list is in camel-case like "Type-of-Service:”. These should
probably be cleaned up. Same for other lists.
- In Section 5.1, would it be useful to explicitly mention MPTCP for the common
elements with TCP, or simply mention that anything that applies to TCP also
applies to MPTCP?
UDP Usage Draft:
- Section 3 has some mismatched parenthetical clauses:
(in and how the
transport is used (based on abstract API descriptions, where they are
available).
- Section 3.1 has a sentence that doesn’t parse well:
should be able to create receive, source and
destination ports and addresses
- Also in Section 3.1, it seems that there should be a comma before the “or by”
rather than a full stop.
1. bind(): A bind operation sets the local port, either
implicitly, triggered by a "sendto" operation on an unbound,
unconnected socket using an ephemeral port. Or by an explicit
"bind" to use a configured or well-known port.
- Section 3.1, "ERROR_REPORT The ERROR_REPORT” is missing the colon that all
other items have. Same for SET_MIN_COVERAGE in section 3.2
> On May 30, 2017, at 3:14 AM, Brian Trammell (IETF) <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> hi Aaron, all,
>
> I've read these, and IMO they're ready for publication. Many thanks to the
> authors for the impressive amount of work that went into them!
>
> Cheers,
>
> Brian
>
>
>> On 29 May 2017, at 18:30, Aaron Falk <[email protected]> wrote:
>>
>> Dear TAPS working group:
>>
>> The authors have indicated the two drafts below are complete and are ready
>> for a final working group review. WGLC starts today and will be three weeks,
>> concluding June 19. Send comments, including an indication that the docs are
>> ready for publication, to the working group list.
>>
>> • On the Usage of Transport Features Provided by IETF Transport
>> Protocols
>> • Features of the User Datagram Protocol (UDP) and Lightweight UDP
>> (UDP- Lite) Transport Protocols
>> —aaron
>>
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