Greetings, all,
The shepherd writeup for the implementation draft is at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-taps-impl/shepherdwriteup/ and is
copied below; if any WG contributors have issues with the text here, please
speak up now.
The only potential issue found by IDNITS with the document are overlong lines
in 6.2 and 6.3; I presume these can be fixed with any other editorial changes
in the RFC Editor process (and indeed, I’m a little confused about how much we
care about line printer formats in 2022), so noted the issue and will leave a
fix to editors’ prerogative.
Cheers,
Brian
# Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents
*This version is dated 4 July 2022.*
Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is
answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call
and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your
diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is
further described in [
RFC 4858
][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors
and editors to complete these checks.
Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure
to answer all of them.
## Document History
1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a
few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement?
This document reached broad agreement, with contributions from most active WG
members.
2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where
the consensus was particularly rough?
No.
3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If
so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
questionnaire is publicly available.)
No.
4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of
the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated
plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere,
either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere
(where)?
This document gives implementation guidelines for the Transport Services
reference architecture and API describe in the -arch and -interface drafts; it
reflects experience gained in one widely deployed production implementation
and two open implementations deployed for research purposes, as listed in
Appendix C.
## Additional Reviews
5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other
IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit
from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which
reviews took place.
The implementation draft has benefited from broad TSV area review within the WG
itself, and has had artart early review.
6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria,
such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.
No formal review necessary.
7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module
been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and
formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is
the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module
comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified
in [RFC 8342][5]?
No YANG module.
8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the
final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code,
BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc.
No formal notation, so no automated checks.
## Document Shepherd Checks
9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this
document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready
to be handed off to the responsible Area Director?
Yes.
10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their
reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified
and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent
reviews?
The artart early review was relatively thorough; secdir comments apply more to
the companion drafts, as do comments recieved for many of the int area topics
(esp. v6).
11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best
Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13],
[Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type
of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent?
Informational is appropriate for experience-driven implementation guidelines.
12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual
property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To
the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If
not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links
to publicly-available messages when applicable.
To the best of my knowledge, all appropriate IPR claims (i.e., none) have been
filed.
13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be
listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page
is greater than five, please provide a justification.
Yes; there are five listed authors.
14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits
tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines” on
authors.ietf.org][15].
(Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings;
a rewrite is underway.)
Overlong lines in sections 6.2 and 6.3 may need an editorial fix. Reference
issues will be fixed by a document rebuild.
15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG
Statement on Normative and Informative References][16].
Verified.
16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did
the community have sufficient access to review any such normative
references?
No non-IETF normative references.
17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP
97][10])
that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so,
list them.
No.
18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be
submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state?
If so, what is the plan for their completion?
No: the companion drafts will be submitted and published together.
19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If
so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs
listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the
introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document
where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed.
No.
20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section,
especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document.
Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are
associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm
that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm
that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents,
allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]).
This document has no actions for IANA, which is appropriate.
21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for
future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear?
Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate.
No new IANA registries
[1]:
https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/
[2]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc4858.html
[3]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7942.html
[4]:
https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-review-tools
[5]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8342.html
[6]:
https://trac.ietf.org/trac/iesg/wiki/ExpertTopics
[7]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp79
[8]:
https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
[9]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc3967.html
[10]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/bcp97
[11]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html
[12]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-5
[13]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.1
[14]:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc2026.html#section-4.2
[15]:
https://authors.ietf.org/en/content-guidelines-overview
[16]:
https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/
[17]:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/
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