Just visited and made a few spelling edits ;) On the page discussing that and which, I came across this:
'''Incorrect''' :You will need to supply information about applications which you want to run with Windows. :You will need to supply information about applications you want to run with Windows. I would argue that the second example is not incorrect. If I were to make any change to the above sentence, it would be to add "the" before applications. I had a writing teacher once that made us go through each of our papers and search on "that". If "that" could be removed while the sentence still made sense, we were to remove it. She argued there was an overuse of "that". Comments/Opinions? I suppose this discussion would be more appropriate on the wiki itself, but I might be talking to myself there ;) Dana W *************************** Dana Worley Software Product Manager/Manager, Software Support Group Campbell Scientific, Inc. Microsoft MVP, Windows Help ______________________________________________ Author Help files and create printed documentation with Doc-To-Help. New release adds Team Authoring Support, enhanced Web-based help technology and PDF output. Learn more at www.doctohelp.com/tcp. Interactive 3D Documentation Parts catalogs, animated instructions, and more. www.i3deverywhere.com _______________________________________________ Technical Communication Professionals Post a message to the list: email [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subscribe, unsubscribe, archives, account options, list info: http://techcommpros.com/mailman/listinfo/tcp_techcommpros.com Subscribe (email): send a blank message to [EMAIL PROTECTED] Unsubscribe (email): send a blank message to [EMAIL PROTECTED] Need help? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED] Get the TCP whole experience! http://www.techcommpros.com
