12/21/22 11:58, Jason McIntyre пишет:
> On Wed, Dec 21, 2022 at 07:40:01AM +0000, Klemens Nanni wrote:
>> On Tue, Dec 20, 2022 at 08:24:29PM +0000, Jason McIntyre wrote:
>>> On Tue, Dec 20, 2022 at 06:24:45PM +0000, Klemens Nanni wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Feedback? OK?
>>>>
>>>
>>> ok, in general i'm fine with this. i do have some concerns though:
>>
>> New diff with all points addressed, see inline for explanations.
>>
> 
> trimming this, but briefly: ok for your diff. i think this is fine. but
> still one nit:
> 
>> Index: usr.bin/csplit/csplit.1
>> ===================================================================
>> RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.bin/csplit/csplit.1,v
>> retrieving revision 1.12
>> diff -u -p -r1.12 csplit.1
>> --- usr.bin/csplit/csplit.1  24 Oct 2015 15:32:50 -0000      1.12
>> +++ usr.bin/csplit/csplit.1  21 Dec 2022 06:56:23 -0000
>> @@ -37,14 +37,15 @@
>>  .Op Fl ks
>>  .Op Fl f Ar prefix
>>  .Op Fl n Ar number
>> -.Ar file args ...
>> +.Ar file
>> +.Ar arg ...
>>  .Sh DESCRIPTION
>>  The
>>  .Nm
>>  utility splits
>>  .Ar file
>> -into pieces using the patterns
>> -.Ar args .
>> +into pieces using the pattern
>> +.Ar arg .
>>  If
>>  .Ar file
>>  is
>> @@ -92,7 +93,7 @@ created.
>>  .El
>>  .Pp
>>  The
>> -.Ar args
>> +.Ar arg
>>  operands may be a combination of the following patterns:
>>  .Bl -tag -width indent
>>  .It Xo
> 
> so, is "arg" an operand or operands? well, it depends how you are
> thinking of it. i would suggest we treat it as singular - it will read
> better, and i don;t think anyone will read this text and complain that
> it was misleading.

Right, I just went with the singular here, thanks.

> 
> jmc
> 

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