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@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ computer.
 To get responsive display performance on some platforms, even for just
 text, you will want to run X.
 These platforms, such as <a href="../sparc.html">sparc</a> and
-<a href="../sparc64.html">sparc64</a> were intended to be used with a
+<a href="../sparc64.html">sparc64</a>, were intended to be used with a
 graphical interface, and the text console performance is very poor.

 <p>
@@ -583,7 +583,7 @@ Here are some tips.

 <ul>
 <li>Read the man page for the X server you are using.
-In our example, the <tt>/var/log/Xorg.0.log</tt> file, we can see X is
+In our example, in the <tt>/var/log/Xorg.0.log</tt> file we can see that X is
 using TDFX as the driver, so that would be the
 <a 
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=tdfx&amp;sektion=4";>tdfx(4)</a>
 man page.
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@ on almost all video cards, including tho
 X server drivers will work with.

 <li>Use different hardware.
-If you have choice on the video card to use, try some others.
+If you have a choice on the video card to use, try some others.


 </ul>
@@ -665,8 +665,8 @@ A large number of window managers are al
 <p>
 Similar to the the <a href="faq10.html#rc">system startup script</a>,
 X has a process it goes through to set up the user environment.
-More accurately, it has more than one process; which is used depends on
-how you <a href="#StartingX">start X</a>.
+More accurately, it has more than one process; which process is used
+depends on how you <a href="#StartingX">start X</a>.
 Understanding how X starts will help you understand how to customize
 your work environment the way you wish it to be.

@@ -693,7 +693,7 @@ X "client" (applications that use X) pro
 When this script exits, the X server shuts down.
 Generally, most of the programs run by this script should run in the
 background, though the last one should run in the foreground (typically
-the window manager), when it exits, the script will exit, and X will be
+the window manager); when it exits, the script will exit, and X will be
 shutdown.

 <p>
@@ -760,7 +760,7 @@ So, if you wish to change your default w
 Again, any programs you want started with X (for example, maybe three
 xterm(1)s) can be placed here, but all should be backgrounded except
 for your window manager, as again, when that exits, your X session
-will be ended.
+will be ended.)
 In this case, xdm(1) will restart X and bring you back to a login
 screen.

@@ -775,7 +775,7 @@ $ startx /usr/local/bin/fluxbox
 Several window managers (including cwm(1) and fvwm(1)) offer the ability
 to change window managers on the fly, without restarting X or any of
 your applications.
-Your new window manager replaces your old one, exiting the newly loaded
+Your new window manager replaces your old one; exiting the newly-loaded
 window manager terminates X, it does not return you back to your
 previous window manager.
 fvwm(1) allows you to start a different window manager by left clicking
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ preferred window manager (however, note
 your alternative window managers to your <tt>.fvwmrc</tt> file (the
 system-wide default is <tt>/usr/X11R6/lib/X11/fvwm/.fvwmrc</tt>)).
 cwm(1) allows you to invoke another window manager by hitting
-Ctrl-Alt-w, and typing in the manager you wish to switch to.
+Ctrl-Alt-w, and typing in the manager you wish to try.

 <p>
 Once you have found a window manager you like, you can set it as the final

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