On Sat, Feb 14, 2015 at 05:16:49PM +0100, Max Fillinger wrote:
> Some small issues in the new section:
> 
> - 'NTP servers' means actual servers, not the keyword, so remove the .Ic
> 
> - 'constraint' is used instead of 'constraint from' in some places; that
>   might be ok as an abbreviation, but at least the example should use
>   the full keyword. In the diff below, I used 'constraint from'
>   everywhere.
> 

fixed, thanks.
jmc

> Index: usr.sbin/ntpd/ntpd.conf.5
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.sbin/ntpd/ntpd.conf.5,v
> retrieving revision 1.27
> diff -u -p -r1.27 ntpd.conf.5
> --- usr.sbin/ntpd/ntpd.conf.5 10 Feb 2015 19:21:16 -0000      1.27
> +++ usr.sbin/ntpd/ntpd.conf.5 14 Feb 2015 15:55:54 -0000
> @@ -188,24 +188,23 @@ thereby reducing the impact of unauthent
>  attacks.
>  Received NTP packets with time information falling outside of a range
>  near the constraint will be discarded and such NTP
> -.Ic servers
> -will be marked as invalid.
> +servers will be marked as invalid.
>  .Bl -tag -width Ds
>  .It Ic constraint from Ar url
>  Specify the URL, IP address or the hostname of an HTTPS server to
>  provide a constraint.
>  If multiple
> -.Ic constraint
> +.Ic constraint from
>  keywords are used,
>  .Xr ntpd 8
>  will calculate a median constraint from all the servers specified.
>  .Bd -literal -offset indent
>  server ntp.example.org
> -constraint www.example.com
> +constraint from www.example.com
>  .Ed
>  .It Ic constraints from Ar url
>  As with
> -.Ic constraint ,
> +.Ic constraint from ,
>  specify the URL, IP address or the hostname of an HTTPS server to
>  provide a constraint.
>  Should the hostname resolve to multiple IP addresses,
> 

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