On 2015/11/23 18:19, Larry Hynes wrote: > Notably Siguature -> Signature and suite -> suit. > > CDROM -> CD-ROM. > > Delete some extraneous whitespace and remove or insert an occasional period. > > Add an occasional 'a'. > > I was unsure how to handle 'Here are several options to multibooting', > so I added '...to <aid> multibooting'. This may not match the original > writer's intention. > > Faced with a choice between 'On some rare occasions' and 'In some rare > situations', to replace 'In some rare occasions', I opted for the former. > > (I generally resisted the urge to express myself.)
I've taken most of these. It may be worth modernising the "multiboot via boot floppy" suggestion for the era of USB drives.. > Does the following need to be amended to reflect a new default setting > of 'no'? > > You will later be given a chance to create an administrative account > and disable remote (SSH) access to the root account, but you still > want a good password on your root account. > > I've left it alone. Perhaps just "s/disable/choose whether to allow/" would be enough..not sure..
