On Fri, Feb 12, 2016 at 05:00:59PM -0500, Peter Bisroev wrote: > > Just in case the previous diff is OK, I am attaching the patch to the > > smtpd.conf man page. > > Hi Gilles, > > I apologize, my previous manpage diff did not include the information > regarding > the fact that connections through local socket will always be tagged 'local'. > > Please find the corrected manpage diff below.
Some minor comments inline below. > Thank you! > --peter > > > Index: smtpd.conf.5 > =================================================================== > RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.sbin/smtpd/smtpd.conf.5,v > retrieving revision 1.153 > diff -u -p -r1.153 smtpd.conf.5 > --- smtpd.conf.5 21 Jan 2016 23:40:27 -0000 1.153 > +++ smtpd.conf.5 12 Feb 2016 21:56:51 -0000 > @@ -654,6 +654,12 @@ of inflight envelopes falls below > Changing the default value might degrade performance. > .It Xo > .Bk -words > +.Ic listen on socket > +.Op Ic filter Ar name > +.Op Ic mask-source > +.Ek > +.br > +.Bk -words > .Ic listen on Ar interface > .Op Ar family > .Op Ic port Ar port > @@ -671,11 +677,28 @@ Changing the default value might degrade > .Ek > .Xc > .Pp > -Specify an > +Specify a > +.Ic socket > +or an > +.Ar interface > +to listen on for incoming connections. A New sentence -> new line, please. > +.Ic listen on socket > +directive is used to customize listening behavior for messages submitted > +through local queues, for example, via the > +.Xr mail 1 > +utility. This is an optional directive, and if not supplied, New sentence, new line. > +.Xr smtpd 8 > +will listen for connections on the > +.Ic socket > +only. Clients connecting through the I do not like the wording "...only." here. Sounds ambiguous. However, I'm not a native speaker. Also, new sentence, new line. > +.Ic socket > +will always be tagged with the 'local' > +.Ic tag . > +.Pp > +To listen on a specific network interface, specify an > .Ar interface > -and > -.Ar port > -to listen on. > +and an optional > +.Ar port . > An interface group, an IP address or a domain name may > be used in place of > .Ar interface . >
