Hi,
The bioctl man-page uses the phrase "The following command, executed
from the command line, ..." in the examples section. A convention I
haven't seen before. I would argue that mentioning the command line is
redundant since it's implied by the actual examples and could therefore
be removed.

Thoughts?

Index: bioctl.8
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RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/bioctl/bioctl.8,v
retrieving revision 1.103
diff -u -p -r1.103 bioctl.8
--- bioctl.8    27 Nov 2016 18:04:18 -0000      1.103
+++ bioctl.8    4 Apr 2017 17:35:00 -0000
@@ -279,17 +279,14 @@ rather than
 This option cannot be used during the initial creation of the crypto volume.
 .El
 .Sh EXAMPLES
-The following command, executed from the command line, would configure
-the device softraid0 with 4 special devices
-(/dev/sd2e, /dev/sd3e, /dev/sd4e, /dev/sd5e) and
-a RAID level of 1:
+The following command would configure the device softraid0 with 4 special
+devices (/dev/sd2e, /dev/sd3e, /dev/sd4e, /dev/sd5e) and a RAID level of 1:
 .Bd -literal -offset 3n
 # bioctl -c 1 -l /dev/sd2e,/dev/sd3e,/dev/sd4e,/dev/sd5e softraid0
 .Ed
 .Pp
-The following command, executed from the command line, would configure the
-device softraid0 with one special device (/dev/sd2e) and an encrypting
-volume:
+The following command would configure the device softraid0 with one special
+device (/dev/sd2e) and an encrypting volume:
 .Bd -literal -offset 3n
 # bioctl -c C -l /dev/sd2e softraid0
 .Ed

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