On Sat, May 05, 2018 at 01:50:30PM +0200, Paul de Weerd wrote:
> During a discussion on IPv6 with Undeadly editor Ross Richardson, he
> pointed out that ifconfig(8) doesn't mention the unit of the arguments
> to the pltime and vltime options.  Here's a diff to fix that:
> 

hi.

> 
> Index: ifconfig.8
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/OpenBSD/cvs/src/sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8,v
> retrieving revision 1.305
> diff -u -p -r1.305 ifconfig.8
> --- ifconfig.8        16 Mar 2018 19:45:13 -0000      1.305
> +++ ifconfig.8        5 May 2018 11:45:03 -0000
> @@ -1197,7 +1197,9 @@ Fill the interface index
>  .Pq the lowermost 64th bit of an IPv6 address
>  automatically.
>  .It Cm pltime Ar n
> -Set preferred lifetime for the address.
> +Set preferred lifetime for the address,
> +.Ar n
> +is given in seconds.

could we get away with just

        ...for the address,
        in seconds.

because i don;t like the sentence splice. if not, i guess

        ...for the address,
        where
        .Ar n
        ...

but i think it is clear enough to just say "in seconds".
jmc

>  .It Cm soii
>  Enable persistent Semantically Opaque Interface Identifiers (SOIIs),
>  as per RFC 7217, for link local and SLAAC addresses on the interface.
> @@ -1219,7 +1221,9 @@ Set the IPv6 tentative address bit.
>  .It Cm -tentative
>  Clear the IPv6 tentative address bit.
>  .It Cm vltime Ar n
> -Set valid lifetime for the address.
> +Set valid lifetime for the address,
> +.Ar n
> +is given in seconds.
>  .El
>  .Sh INTERFACE GROUPS
>  .Nm ifconfig
> 
> -- 
> >++++++++[<++++++++++>-]<+++++++.>+++[<------>-]<.>+++[<+
> +++++++++++>-]<.>++[<------------>-]<+.--------------.[-]
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