On Fri, Jul 13, 2018 at 01:00:59PM +0100, Ricardo Mestre wrote:
> This one looks better
> 
> Index: unveil.2
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/lib/libc/sys/unveil.2,v
> retrieving revision 1.1
> diff -u -p -u -r1.1 unveil.2
> --- unveil.2    13 Jul 2018 09:25:22 -0000      1.1
> +++ unveil.2    13 Jul 2018 11:59:49 -0000
> @@ -31,11 +31,10 @@ removes visibility of the envire filesys
>  filesystem-related system calls (
>  .Xr open 2 ,
>  .Xr chmod 2 ,
> -.Xe rename 2,
> -etc).
> -except for the specified
> +.Xr rename 2 ,
> +etc) except for the specified

sth like

        ...system calls (such as
        .Xr open 2 ,
        ...
        and
        .Xr rename 2 ) ,
        except for ...

it is better not to use etc there so we don;t have to have a horrible
.), type structure.

otherwise ok

jmc

>  .Ar path.
> -Subequent calls to
> +Subsequent calls to
>  .Nm
>  expose additional views of the filesystem.
>  .Pp
> @@ -61,7 +60,7 @@ argument points to a string consisting o
>  .Bl -tag -width c -offset indent -compact
>  .It Dv r
>  .Ar path
> -hould be made  be available for read operations corresponding to
> +should be made available for read operations corresponding to
>  .Xr pledge 2
>  promise
>  .Ar rpath .
> 

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