I really dislike submissions which declare "I don't understand
so here is a diff which delete is".

You didn't try to improve it.

The text should stay.

> The wording of ifconfig DIAGNOSTICS can possibly baffle
> a non-native speaker (such as me) with
> 
>   Messages indicating the specified interface does not exist,
> 
> namely, only after parsing the (non)sentence does one realize
> that the diagnostics consists of messages indicating THAT
> the interface does not exist etc.
> 
> As the paragraph does not list the messages (surely there are many),
> this really boils down to mentioning that ifconfig does indeed have
> diagnostic messages.
> 
> I believe nothing would be lost
> if this paragraph was deleted.
> 
>       Jan
> 
> 
> Index: ifconfig.8
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8,v
> retrieving revision 1.319
> diff -u -p -r1.319 ifconfig.8
> --- ifconfig.8        8 Sep 2018 15:21:03 -0000       1.319
> +++ ifconfig.8        22 Oct 2018 06:35:01 -0000
> @@ -1871,10 +1871,6 @@ Create the gif1 network interface:
>  Put the athn0 wireless interface into monitor mode:
>  .Pp
>  .Dl # ifconfig athn0 mediaopt monitor
> -.Sh DIAGNOSTICS
> -Messages indicating the specified interface does not exist, the
> -requested address is unknown, or the user is not privileged and
> -tried to alter an interface's configuration.
>  .Sh SEE ALSO
>  .Xr netstat 1 ,
>  .Xr ifmedia 4 ,
> 

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