Be more specific? What could you possibly mean? I directed my comments to one paragraph. I included references to specific instructions on how to rewrite that paragraph, sentence by sentence. Its good advice and has been followed by others to their advantage.
Are you asking me to write that paragraph for you? You're in the B-Pile now. You're going to have to work pretty hard to get even one more email out of me. On May 12, 2012, at 11:51 AM, Messaging Design Pattern wrote: > Please be more specific ... It seems vague and cryptic. Not sure how to > reply. Sorry, I'm not trying to be rude or anything. However the message was > very specific and clear: > > "Also, I would appreciate it if you could keep making your questions/comments > as specific as possible. This allows me to send appropriate responses. Feel > free to quote specific sections of the draft." > > Thanks, > > Al > > --- On Sat, 5/12/12, Ward Cunningham <[email protected]> wrote: > > From: Ward Cunningham <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: [telecom-patterns] Realistic Information Model and Concepts > To: "Messaging Design Pattern" <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected], [email protected], > [email protected], [email protected] > Date: Saturday, May 12, 2012, 6:36 PM > > Wow. I couldn't get past the abstract. What a monolith. > > <PastedGraphic-3.png> > I suggest you take a look at Kent Beck's advice on writing abstracts: > > http://plg.uwaterloo.ca/~migod/research/beckOOPSLA.html > > Best regards. -- Ward > > > On May 12, 2012, at 11:13 AM, Messaging Design Pattern wrote: > >> >> Dear List members, >> >> I hope you are all doing well. Please find enclosed a link to a draft >> discussing a Realistic Information Model and Concepts: >> >> http://java.net/projects/jt/downloads/download/Papers/Concept.pdf >> >> Your feedback would be appreciated. This draft also includes additional >> information regarding previous discussions (best >> practices,drawbacks,implementation considerations, versioning, etc.). An >> earlier version was submitted for publication. I've added many new sections >> since. >> >> Also, I would appreciate it if you could keep making your questions/comments >> as specific as possible. This allows me to send appropriate responses. Feel >> free to quote specific sections of the draft. >> >> Regards, >> Al >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> telecom-patterns mailing list >> [email protected] >> http://lists.cs.uiuc.edu/mailman/listinfo/telecom-patterns >
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