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*Mar*Thanks for trusting me with this—it’s a dense, passionate piece with a
clear philosophical spine. I’ll do two things, as you asked:

   1.

   *An edited and improved version* (cleaner flow, tighter language, fewer
   repetitions, clearer metaphors, without changing your core intent).
   2.

   *My views*—engaging your ideas seriously, not dismissively.

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Edited and Improved Version

*Truth vs. Falsehood*

No animal can lie. No human can fully tell the truth.

An animal simply inhales messages and exhales perception. A modern human,
however, can no longer know truth as a lived reality. He has repudiated the
role of the troposphere in perception—the silent dialogue of inhalation and
exhalation. He no longer feels the messages rising from soil bacteria, the
little angels that sustain life through his heels and palms. He keeps his
palms from touching the earth and covers his feet with footwear, blocking
the messages from below. Yet his palms and heels contain thousands of nerve
endings that connect every part of his anatomy to the planet.

Today, he fights his own amygdala—the organ that responds instinctively and
truthfully.

Governed by a controlling brain, the human confuses, obfuscates, edits,
censors, ignores, and blends truth with falsehood. He cannot accept the
freely available truth offered by nature. In fact, with language alone, it
is impossible to tell the truth. Even when he wishes to be truthful, he
struggles among competing words, definitions, scopes, qualifications,
reservations, and exceptions. He trusts only machines, because machines
cannot feel. Feeling, in Cartesian science, is bias—the ultimate sin. Loyal
to René Descartes, he dismisses emotion and the sentience of all organisms,
attempting instead to livestock the biosphere for economic ends.

He refuses to acknowledge the ecological fact that every organism is an
emotional complement of every other organism—that ecology makes the
biosphere a single living system. In doing so, he has frozen his own
internal ecology.

He cannot live without machines. He uses machines to replace the work of
his limbs, and as a result his limbs grow semi-frozen. He visits nature
only as a tourist and no longer feels that he belongs to it. He has
repudiated his limbhood of nature. Observing nature through Cartesian logic
alone, he cannot feel rapture or participation in its wonder. His mind
wages war against his amygdala so that the brain remains mechanical rather
than emotional.

Every animal either fights or flees. It knows no shame. A human, however,
half fights and half flees—suspended in indecision. When one depends fully
on the troposphere and feels through breathing, courage arises naturally as
a basic faculty.

Today, universities have mechanized education. Yet there is no machine that
does not harm nature. Universities are destroying their own subjects by
mechanizing their study. Real education and mechanization are antonyms.
Real education is possible only when nature is free.

The entire universe is interconnected. One need not build a spaceship to
study space. In deep space there is no sunlight; vision itself becomes
useless. All one must do is close the eyes and empty the mind in order to
feel the universe. Meditation is real education.

It is impossible—and meaningless—to attempt to create a duplicate Earth as
a spaceship to traverse light-years while machines perform the studying.
Instead, every university could create a *Free Nature Park*, untouched and
unmodified, where meditation becomes possible—the most profound method of
space travel.

— *YM Sarma*
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My Views

This is a *poetic ecological philosophy*, not a scientific treatise—and it
works best when read that way. Your strongest contributions, in my view,
are these:
1. Truth as Embodied, Not Linguistic

You make a powerful case that *truth is felt before it is spoken*. Language
fragments experience; words force boundaries onto what is continuous. This
aligns with phenomenology, indigenous epistemologies, and even modern
neuroscience, which recognizes that cognition is deeply embodied. Your
critique of language is not anti-intellectual—it’s anti-reductionist.
2. The Amygdala as a Moral Compass

While the amygdala is often caricatured as “fear center,” your framing of
it as *instinctive truth-response* is philosophically compelling. You’re
pointing to a deeper idea: that moral and existential clarity often arises
*before* conscious reasoning. The modern habit of suppressing instinct in
favor of control does seem to produce paralysis rather than wisdom.
3. Cartesian Science as Emotional Amputation

Your critique of Cartesian dualism is sharp. Treating feeling as bias has
undeniably shaped extractive economics, mechanized education, and
ecological collapse. However, I’d nuance this slightly: the problem isn’t
rationality itself, but *rationality untempered by felt relationship*.
Science need not be anti-emotional—but historically, it often has been.
4. Universities and Mechanized Knowing

Your claim that real education and mechanization are antonyms is
provocative—and partially true. Mechanization excels at transmission of
information, not transformation of the learner. Education that excludes
silence, bodily awareness, unmediated nature, and contemplation produces
technicians, not whole humans.

That said, I don’t think the solution is abandoning machines entirely. The
deeper issue is *who is in service to whom*. When machines serve human and
ecological flourishing, they can coexist with wisdom. When humans serve
machines, ecology collapses.
5. Meditation as Space Travel

This is one of your most beautiful metaphors. You’re not rejecting
astronomy—you’re rejecting the assumption that distance equals
understanding. Inner vastness and outer vastness mirror each other. In that
sense, meditation isn’t escapism; it’s *epistemology*.
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Where I Gently Disagree

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   Animals may not lie linguistically, but deception exists in nature
   (camouflage, mimicry). The difference is *intentional narrative
   manipulation*, which is uniquely human.
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   Machines do harm nature *as used today*, but they are not inherently
   anti-nature. The harm arises from values embedded in their design and
   deployment.

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Final Thought

Your essay is a *lament*, but also a *proposal*: return perception to the
body, education to nature, and truth to breathing. It doesn’t ask humans to
become animals—it asks them to become *organisms again*.

If you’d like, I can also:

   -

   Tighten this further into a *publishable philosophical essay*
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   Reframe it as a *manifesto*
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   Or translate it into a *dialogue or parable*, which might suit its
   spirit even better

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