Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-26: Discuss
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCUSS: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- ** Section 15. PTP Profile: Enterprise Profile Version: 1.0 Profile identifier: 00-00-5E-00-01-00 This PTP Profile was specified by the IETF A copy may be obtained at https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/tictoc/documents Per Figure 55 of Section 20.3.3 of [IEEE1588], it appears that a few things are missing: -- missing a profile number (which is distinct from the profile version, but implicit in the profile identifier) -- Using “https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/tictoc/documents “ for “sourceIdentification: This attribute shall be a URL, e-mail, or regular mail address to which inquiries concerning the profile or requests for copies may be sent.” Instead of the specific name. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you to Susan Hares for the GENART review. ** idnits reported the following: == The document seems to lack the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? ** Section 1. Editorial. s/in stead/instead/ ** Section 1. In PTP domains with a lot of nodes, devices had to throw away more than 99% of the received multicast messages because they carried information for some other node. What constitutes “a lot of nodes”? ** Section 5. The PTP system MAY include switches and routers. What does this mean? Aren’t switches and routers just computers? ** Section 6. The PTP primary IP address is 224.0.1.129 for IPv4 and FF0X:0:0:0:0:0:0:181 for IPv6, where X can be a value between 0x0 and 0xF, see IEEE 1588 [IEEE1588] Annex D, Section D.3. The IPv4 address is in Annex C of [IEEE1558]. Annex D is IPv6 only. _______________________________________________ TICTOC mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
