I think we are getting somewhere! Not much of a fan of the "handwritten" visual here, I don't really like the tick but I think can live with it :) Recreated it um full vector fashion to keep the SVG as true to itself as possible, also made an alternate version to see if anyone prefers a cleaner look. Would love to hear Jeremy and everyone else opinion before we can call anything final.
<http://www.duarteramos.pt/media/share/TiddlyWiki_TiddlerPoster08.png> <http://www.duarteramos.pt/media/share/TiddlyWiki_TiddlerPoster07.png> On Thursday, 8 January 2015 14:17:33 UTC, Mat wrote: > > Beginning to think maybe correspondence woudl be smoother via email, but > after each draft I find myself going "ok, just a few tiny things and then > we should be done!" - which has been going on now for quite a few drafts ;-) > > Anyway, here are just a few tiny things and then we should be done: > > I took the liberty of doing some editing myself, among other things to > make it even more balanced. This included move the fish vertically a bit > and making tw.com a bit more subtle (nobody can miss it though). I think > it looks good, what do you say? I suggest putting my version as a > transparent layer on top of yours to see all the detail changes. > > > <https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/--_BEuTiYnlQ/VK6NGrLpYmI/AAAAAAAAPHg/N3gasKR5xUU/s1600/DuartesPoster_MatVersion1.png> > > I'm really happy we got some input from my teacher. It really improves it. > The bit about putting the headline alone on top is great and, funnily, by > putting the url under the fish it almost like when you have an image with a > descriptive text under it, i.e "here you see a tiddlywiki fish" sort of. > > Now... what I would *really* prefer is actually this one crucial bit to > make sure they can't miss what might very well be the tipping point to make > them actually try it out. See pic below. The line is * intended* to look > as if a friend of theirs just wanted to make sure they didn't miss it and > so simply picked up a pen: > > > <https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-qr9UBCh0ELM/VK6N9ijhJsI/AAAAAAAAPHo/M0-ssKCFhNM/s1600/DuartesPoster_MatVersion2.png> > The line is from this > <http://thumb7.shutterstock.com/display_pic_with_logo/954646/219601339/stock-vector-set-of-correction-and-highlight-elements-part-circles-arrows-lines-etc-hand-drawn-with-219601339.jpg> > > image (cut out and manipulated). I found it by searching on google images > for "hand drawn line" and selecting color blue. BTW, the above versions are > a mix of cut+move, type on top of stuff, etc so they are not real quality > with vectors etc. > > I can only speak for myself, but I would be happy if it looks like this > last variant. > > > <:-) > > > > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "TiddlyWiki" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/tiddlywiki. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.
