Hi,

Throughout the document, it is pretty clear what optionality refers to:

    1.  Introduction
    [...]
    -  Authentication: The server side of the channel is always
       authenticated; the client side is optionally authenticated.

and from the same Protocol Overview section, 2 pages later:


    -  Authentication: Authenticate the server (and, optionally, the
       client) and provide key confirmation and handshake integrity.

The "optionally authenticate each other" text appears to have been
carried over from TLS 1.2 and before where anonymous key exchanges were
still a thing.

I don't think there is any misinterpretation possible from someone
reading the whole section and I like the current conciseness. A longer,
but technically more accurate version could be:

    [..], authenticate the server to the client, optionally authenticate
    the client to the server, [..]

I suggest (reluctantly) accepting this ("Held for Document Update") or
rejecting it.

Kind regards,
Peter

On Fri, Apr 24, 2020 at 02:15:22AM -0700, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8446,
> "The Transport Layer Security (TLS) Protocol Version 1.3".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6123
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Ben Smyth <resea...@bensmyth.com>
> 
> Section: 2
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> The handshake protocol allows peers to negotiate a protocol version, select 
> cryptographic algorithms, optionally authenticate each other, and establish 
> shared secret keying material.
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Only client authentication is optional (albeit, server authentication is 
> implicit for PSK-only key exchange mode)
> 
> Instructions:
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8446 (draft-ietf-tls-tls13-28)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : The Transport Layer Security (TLS) Protocol Version 1.3
> Publication Date    : August 2018
> Author(s)           : E. Rescorla
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Transport Layer Security
> Area                : Security
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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