Alessandro has been on the ball and submitted PRs for these. See below. > On Sep 20, 2021, at 07:59, Lars Eggert via Datatracker <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate-08: Yes > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose > to > address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by > automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there > will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you > did with these suggestions. > > Section 1. , paragraph 2, nit: > - the end of 2013, based on both the Wang, et. al, attack and the > - - > + the end of 2013, based on both the Wang, et al., attack and the > + +
Addressed via: https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate/pull/27/files > Uncited references: [CAB-Baseline] Addressed via: https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate/pull/26 > Obsolete reference to RFC5246, obsoleted by RFC8446 (this may be on purpose). It is on purpose ;) While 5246 is obsoleted it is not yet made historic and it’s still used A LOT. > These URLs in the document did not return content: > * https://www.cabforum.org/documents.html This one gets fixed by removing the reference in: https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate/pull/26 Cheers, spt _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls
