> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > [S4; nit] > > * s/quantum computes/quantum computers/? > > [S4.2; nit] > > * "including, for example, including ..." -> "including, for example, ..." > > [S5.2; nit] > > * "or even less number of buttons" -> "or even fewer buttons", perhaps > > * "baked into or hardware or software" -> "baked into hardware or software"
All of these are fixed. > [S5.3; question] > > * What does "routable" mean in an identities context? Perhaps there is > some simpler rewording that preserves the essential meaning (or maybe > this is well-understood and I'm just not up to speed yet). > > I could not find "rout"-stemmed words in draft-mattsson-emu-eap-tls-psk. draft-mattsson-emu-eap-tls-psk says: The TLS PSK identity is typically derived by the TLS implementation and may be an opaque blob without a routable realm. The realm portion of the identity is used to select to proper server to handle EAP. > [S8; nit] > > * s/beynond/beyond/ Fixed. Russ _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls
