Hi folks,
Nice work on the draft by all so far.
I had some comments/questions on section 5:
* A very minor issue: Section 5.1 has 3 instances of the misspelling
"varient".
* Section 5.2: The last sentence: "Both sides uses their copy of the
shared secret as a component within the hybrid shared secret. where
the client's key share is the Kyber public key, and the server's key
share is the" has a few issues:
o We never find out what the server's key share is.
o (Minor) "Both sides uses" should be "Both sides use".
o The period after "secret" should probably be either a comma or
colon.
Regards,
Dave
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