I support adoption, as long as the RECOMMENDED field is set to N at this point
in time (which is a case).
Nits:
* draft talks about "expanded keys" and "decapsulation key seeds", but does
not define them. I think it would be good to refer to the relevant sections in
the FIPS-203, to make it clear what they are.
* Section 4. ends weirdly "Section 4.2.7 of [RFC8446]" - should this be a full
sentence?
* Double 'and' in the Abstract "...NamedGroups and and registers IANA..." and
double 'the' in Section 5.
Kris
On 08/11/2025 15:37, Russ Housley wrote:
I support adoption.
I am pleased to see the IANA registry entries for the ML-KEM code points as
RECOMMENDED = N; at some point in the future the TLS WG might want to change
that, but this seems like the right place to start.
Nits:
Abstract: s/and and/and/
Section 1.1: s/key establishment/key encapsulation/
Russ
On Nov 5, 2025, at 1:51 PM, Sean Turner via Datatracker<[email protected]> wrote:
Subject: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-tls-mlkem-05 (Ends 2025-11-26)
This message starts a 3-week WG Last Call for this document.
Abstract:
This memo defines ML-KEM-512, ML-KEM-768, and ML-KEM-1024 as
NamedGroups and and registers IANA values in the TLS Supported Groups
registry for use in TLS 1.3 to achieve post-quantum (PQ) key
establishment.
File can be retrieved from:
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