Mike Bishop has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-mlkem-03: No Objection

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# IESG review of draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-mlkem-03

CC @MikeBishop

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Typos

#### Section 2, paragraph 1
```
-    in this document may be implemented in a FIPS approved way as
-                                                 ^
+    in this document may be implemented in a FIPS-approved way as
+                                                 ^
```

### Capitalization of references

Lowercasing `[rfc7748]` when all the other RFC references are all-caps is
confusing some automated systems and looks odd. If there's not a particular
reason for the difference, consider being consistent.



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