#24574: Pull request: Use English "singular they" at a few places
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Reporter: iblech | Owner: (none)
Type: defect | Status: needs_revision
Priority: Low | Milestone:
Component: Webpages/Website | Version:
Severity: Normal | Resolution:
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Changes (by catalyst):
* status: new => needs_revision
Comment:
I approve of this approach. The changes look reasonable to me. I haven't
verified whether they're exhaustive.
It could use a minor revision:
"watches traffic at both ends of a circuit and confirms their guess that
they're communicating" probably should be reworded to something like
"watches traffic at both ends of a circuit and confirms their guess that
those endpoints are communicating" to avoid ambiguity.
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Ticket URL: <https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/ticket/24574#comment:2>
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