commit 5d9cc376b456da7c0c846a1038901ceb26e6a7d6
Author: Runa A. Sandvik <[email protected]>
Date:   Mon Nov 7 09:31:07 2011 +0000

    Updated the tor cloud documentation
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@@ -49,47 +49,51 @@
          <div class="main" role="main">
            <hgroup>
              <div class="deco first"></div>
-             <h2>Tor Cloud on Amazon EC2</h2>
+             <h2>Tor in the Amazon cloud</h2>
            </hgroup>
-       <p>The Tor Cloud is a user friendly way of deploying bridges
-       to help users in countries securely access the Internet,
-       free of censorship. By donating your bandwidth to the Tor
-        Network, you improve the safety and speed at which users
-        can access the Internet. <a href="https://www.torproject.org";
-        target="_blank">Learn more about Tor &raquo;</a></p>
+       <p>The Tor Cloud project gives you a user-friendly way of deploying
+       bridges to help users access an uncensored Internet. By setting up a
+       bridge, you donate bandwidth to the Tor network and help improve the
+       safety and speed at which users can access the Internet. <a
+               href="https://www.torproject.org";
+               target="_blank">Learn more about Tor &raquo;</a></p>
            <p>This project runs on the Amazon EC2 cloud computing
-           platform, which powers Amazon.com and other major websites
-           such as Netflix. Users are able to launch their own
-           virtual machines and computing resources with flexible and
-           cost-effective terms. The Tor network can always benefit from
-           more volunteer bandwidth. <a href="http://aws.amazon.com/ec2/";
+           platform, which powers Amazon.com and other major websites. Amazon
+           EC2 allows users to launch their own virtual machines and computing
+           resources with flexible and cost-effective terms. <a
+                   href="http://aws.amazon.com/ec2/";
            target="_blank">Learn more about Amazon EC2 &raquo;</a></p>
-       <p>Setting up a Tor bridge in the Amazon cloud is simple and
-       will only take you a couple of minutes. The images have all been
-       configured with automatic package updates and port forwarding, so you
-       do not have to worry about Tor not working or lacking security updates.
+       <p>Setting up a Tor bridge on Amazon EC2 is simple and will only take
+       you a couple of minutes. The images have been configured with automatic
+       package updates and port forwarding, so you do not have to worry about
+       Tor not working or the server not getting security updates.
        <a href="https://cloud.torproject.org/#get_started"; target="_blank">Get
                started with Tor Cloud &raquo;</a></p>
            <hgroup>
              <div class="deco"></div>
-             <h2>AWS Free Usage Tier</h2>
+             <h2>How much does it cost?</h2>
            </hgroup>
-           <p>750 hours of Amazon EC2 Linux Micro Instance usage,
-           enough hours to run continuously each month.</p>
-           <p class="footnote">* visit <a
-           href="http://aws.amazon.com/free/";
+           <p>To help new customers get started in the cloud, Amazon is
+           introducing a free usage tier. The Tor Cloud images are all micro
+           instances, and new customers will be able to run a free micro
+           instance for a whole year. Please see <a 
href="http://aws.amazon.com/free/";
            target="_blank">http://aws.amazon.com/free/</a> for
            details. </p>
-           <p>Don't qualify for the Free Tier? No problem, our images
-           are configured to limit usage at $30/month based on Amazon
-           fees.</p>
+           <p>Don't qualify for the Free Tier? No problem. The Tor Cloud
+           images have been <a href="torrc.txt">configured</a> with a
+           bandwidth limit. We have <a
+                   
href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/ticket/3574#comment:4";>estimated</a>
+           that running a bridge will cost around $30 a month, depending on
+           the region you put it in. See the <a
+                   href="http://aws.amazon.com/ec2/pricing/";>Amazon EC2
+                   Pricing</a> page for more information.</p>
          </div>
 
 <!-- Get Started -->
          <div class="main" role="main">
            <hgroup>
              <div class="deco first"></div>
-             <h2>Sign up for an AWS account</h2>
+             <h2>Sign up</h2>
            </hgroup>
            <p>Before you can set up a bridge, you need to sign up for
            an <i>Amazon <br> Web Services (AWS)</i> account.
@@ -102,16 +106,19 @@
            </p>
             <hgroup>
             <div class="deco"></div>
-            <h2>Select type of relay and its location</h2>
+            <h2>Select a region</h2>
             </hgroup>
-           <p>The images below have been configured as public bridges.
-           The cost of running a bridge in the Amazon Cloud depends on
-           a number of factors, including the region you decide to
-           put it in. See <a href="http://aws.amazon.com/ec2/pricing/";>Amazon 
EC2
-           Pricing</a> for more information.</p>
+           <p>The images below are all configured as bridges.
+           We have <a
+                   
href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/ticket/3574#comment:4";>estimated</a>
+           that running a bridge will cost around $30 a month, depending on
+           the region you put it in. See the <a
+                   href="http://aws.amazon.com/ec2/pricing/";>Amazon EC2
+                   Pricing</a> page for more information.</p>
     <br>
            <ul class="region-nav">
-           <li><a class="region" 
href="https://console.aws.amazon.com/ec2/home?region=us-east-1#launchAmi=ami-11af6d78";
 target="_blank">us-east-1<br>Virginia</a></li>
+           <li><a class="region"
+                   
href="https://console.aws.amazon.com/ec2/home?region=us-east-1#launchAmi=ami-11af6d78";
 target="_blank">us-east-1<br>Virginia</a></li>
            <li><a class="region" 
href="https://console.aws.amazon.com/ec2/home?region=us-west-1#launchAmi=ami-4bf9a40e";
 target="_blank">us-west-1<br>N. California</a></li>
            <li><a class="region"  
href="https://console.aws.amazon.com/ec2/home?region=ap-northeast-1#launchAmi=ami-3807b239";
 target="_blank">ap-northeast-1<br>Tokyo</a></li>
            <li><a class="region"  
href="https://console.aws.amazon.com/ec2/home?region=eu-west-1#launchAmi=ami-9c99aae8";
 target="_blank">eu-west-1<br>Ireland</a></li>
@@ -120,10 +127,12 @@
 
            <hgroup>
              <div class="deco"></div>
-             <h2>Step by Step Process</h2>
+             <h2>Step by step process</h2>
            </hgroup>
-           <p>Once you have selected a relay and its location, you will be 
redirected to Amazon's management console.
-           Simply follow the steps as illustrated below, and your relay will 
up and running in just a couple of minutes:</p>
+           <p>After selecting the region, you will be redirected to Amazon's
+           management console. Simply follow the steps as illustrated below,
+           and your bridge will up and running in just a couple of
+           minutes:</p>
            <div class='slider-wrapper theme-orman'>
              <div id='slider' class='nivoSlider'>
                  <img src="img/tor-1.png" alt="" title="Click
@@ -133,14 +142,19 @@
                  <img src="img/step-3.png" alt="" title="Click
                  &quot;Continue&quot;. (No changes needed here.)"/>
                  <img src="img/step-4.png" alt="" title="Select
-                 &quot;Proceed without Key Pair&quot; and click
-                 &quot;Continue&quot;."/>
+                 &quot;Create a new Key Pair&quot;, type
+                 &quot;tor-cloud-servers&quot; for key pair name, and
+                 click &quot;Create & Download your Key Pair&quot;. You will
+                 need the key pair if you want to connect to your instance
+                 using SSH."/>
                  <img src="img/step-5.png" alt="" title="Select
-                 &quot;Create a new Security Policy&quot;,
+                 &quot;Create a new Security Group&quot;,
                  type &quot;tor-cloud-servers&quot; for Group
-                 Name and Description. Select &quot;HTTPS&quot;
+                 Name and Group Description. You need to create two
+                 rules; HTTPS and SSH. Select &quot;HTTPS&quot;
                  from the &quot;Create a new rule&quot; dropdown
-                 and click on &quot;Add Rule&quot;. Then Click
+                 and click on &quot;Add Rule&quot;. Do the same for
+                 SSH. Then click
                  &quot;Continue&quot;."/>
                  <img src="img/step-6.png" alt="" title="Click
                  &quot;Launch&quot;."/>
@@ -171,7 +185,8 @@
        SSH.</p>
 
        <p><b>3. What's in the Tor configuration file?</b><br>
-       Answer here.</p>
+       The Tor configuration file that the images have been
+       configured with can be found <a href="torrc.txt">here</a>.</p>
        
        <p><b>4. Will the images automatically download and install package 
updates?</b><br>
        Yes, the images have all been configured with the <a 
href="https://help.ubuntu.com/community/AutomaticSecurityUpdates";><i>unattended-upgrades</i></a>
 package. This means that your system will automatically download and install 
updates.</p>
@@ -189,7 +204,7 @@
        Yes, simply join #tor on irc.oftc.net and ask your question. It may 
take a while before we get back to you, so please be patient.</p>
 
        <p><b>8. I have a question that is not answered here, what do I 
do?</b><br>
-       Please send an email to <i>help AT rt.torproject.org</i> and we'll make 
sure it gets added to the list.</p>
+       Please send an email to <i>help AT rt.torproject.org</i>.</p>
 </div>
 
        </div>

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