commit 5b7a3f1509fc331fe7a444eb7f2ac63c9bbb7ad6
Author: gus <[email protected]>
Date: Tue Sep 3 12:00:52 2019 -0400
better strings for l10n, layout, trailing spaces
---
content/outreach/contents.lr | 3 ++-
content/training/faq/contents.lr | 8 +++++---
content/training/risks/contents.lr | 22 +++++++++++++++-------
content/user-testing/current/contents.lr | 4 ++--
4 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/content/outreach/contents.lr b/content/outreach/contents.lr
index e6d65ef..8e7206a 100644
--- a/content/outreach/contents.lr
+++ b/content/outreach/contents.lr
@@ -20,4 +20,5 @@ body:
##Tell the world about Tor
-We love it when people bring information about Tor to their community events,
conferences, and meetups. We've curated some beautiful materials for sharing
in-person and on social media we welcome you to use.
\ No newline at end of file
+We love it when people bring information about Tor to their community events,
conferences, and meetups.
+We've curated some beautiful materials for sharing in-person and on social
media we welcome you to use.
diff --git a/content/training/faq/contents.lr b/content/training/faq/contents.lr
index f305b85..69a2d72 100644
--- a/content/training/faq/contents.lr
+++ b/content/training/faq/contents.lr
@@ -4,10 +4,12 @@ title: Tor Training FAQ
---
body:
-After running a couple of Tor training, you will find out that first time
users have some similar questions about Tor. Here we aggregate the most
frequent questions that we listened during our training sessions and you must
be aware before running your training. For an extensive resource check [Support
portal](https://support.torproject.org).
+After running a couple of Tor training, you will find out that first time
users have some similar questions about Tor.
+Here we aggregate the most frequent questions that we listened during our
training sessions and you must be aware before running your training.
+For an extensive resource check [Support
portal](https://support.torproject.org).
* [Why is it called
Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/about/why-is-it-called-tor/)
- * [Does using Tor Browser protect other applications on my
computer?](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-13/)
+ * [Does using Tor Browser protect other applications on my
computer?](https://support.torproject.org/tbb/tbb-13/)
* [Using Tor with a VPN is more
secure?](https://support.torproject.org/faq/faq-5/)
* [Can I browse normal HTTPS sites with
Tor?](https://support.torproject.org/https/https-2/)
* [Is it possible to find out the path that a client is taking on the Tor
Network?](https://support.torproject.org/misc/misc-1/)
@@ -34,4 +36,4 @@ section_id: training
---
subtitle:
-You probably should know these answers before teaching about Tor
+You probably should know these answers before teaching about Tor
diff --git a/content/training/risks/contents.lr
b/content/training/risks/contents.lr
index 6da1774..c1fea57 100644
--- a/content/training/risks/contents.lr
+++ b/content/training/risks/contents.lr
@@ -4,17 +4,22 @@ title: Risks
---
body:
-To our knowledge, no Tor trainer has ever faced consequences as a result of
training others or speaking about Tor. However, in some countries and in
certain circumstances, it's possible that a simply gathering of human rights
defenders could be very risky, illegal or even subject of imprisonment,
physical assaults, large fines, threats, placement on government watch lists
and targeting for surveillance.
+To our knowledge, no Tor trainer has ever faced consequences as a result of
training others or speaking about Tor.
+However, in some countries and in certain circumstances, it's possible that a
simply gathering of human rights defenders could be very risky, illegal or even
subject of imprisonment, physical assaults, large fines, threats, placement on
government watch lists and targeting for surveillance.
If you want to run a Tor training for the first time and you don't know how to
assess the political and social environment, we strongly encourage you read
this document and, in case of doubt, to reach out Tor Community Team privately.
-Some of potential risks of running a digital security training are only valid
in specific contexts. Therefore the potential risks associated to running a Tor
training depend on:
+Some of potential risks of running a digital security training are only valid
in specific contexts.
+Therefore the potential risks associated to running a Tor training depend on:
1. **Your threat model.** A high-profile activist already under a lot of
surveillance, for example, might attract more attention when reaching out other
activists to run a digital security training.
2. **The laws and regulations in the country.** Best to consult with local
lawyers and local freedom of expression organizations, and learn whether your
country has a record in prosecuting individuals engaging in similar types of
activities.
-3. **The types of training.** Not all trainings carry the same weight in terms
of potential risk. For example, talking about privacy on digital age might be
appreciable, but teaching how to circumvent government censorship could be a
serious felony.
+3. **The types of training.** Not all trainings carry the same weight in terms
of potential risk.
+ For example, talking about privacy on digital age might be appreciable, but
teaching how to circumvent government censorship could be a serious felony.
4. **The audience.** Gathering university students might not attract
attention, but in case of a group of journalists working on leaked documents
about government corruption, you might need to be extra careful on how to reach
out them in a private way.
-5. **The training venue.** Running a Tor training in some spaces could expose
your participants identity. Ideally, you should use a private space that you
can control the participants entrance. Check before the training if
participants are comfortable on revealing their identity to a third party, if
it's the case.
+5. **The training venue.** Running a Tor training in some spaces could expose
your participants identity.
+ Ideally, you should use a private space that you can control the
participants entrance.
+ Check before the training if participants are comfortable on revealing
their identity to a third party, if it's the case.
## Evaluating risks
@@ -29,12 +34,15 @@ Some questions you may want to answer before running a
digital security training
Note, this is not an exhaustive list of questions.
-Additionally, while many countries do not have laws specifically prohibiting
the activity of running digital security training, the use of digital security
tools may still be criminalized in certain countries under other, broader laws.
For example, using Tor Browser may be viewed as illegal or anti-government
activity.
+Additionally, while many countries do not have laws specifically prohibiting
the activity of running digital security training, the use of digital security
tools may still be criminalized in certain countries under other, broader laws.
+For example, using Tor Browser may be viewed as illegal or anti-government
activity.
-Please note that we are not lawyers, and any information we give you does not
constitute legal advice. Additionally, your communication with us is not
protected by any legal privilege so law enforcement may subpoena and obtain any
information you give us. However, we may be able to put you in touch with
lawyers who are capable of addressing your questions and/or concerns.
+Please note that we are not lawyers, and any information we give you does not
constitute legal advice.
+Additionally, your communication with us is not protected by any legal
privilege so law enforcement may subpoena and obtain any information you give
us.
+However, we may be able to put you in touch with lawyers who are capable of
addressing your questions and/or concerns.
Some relevant resources include:
-
+
* [EFF Know your rights](https://www.eff.org/issues/know-your-rights)
* [EFF Tor legal
FAQ](https://community.torproject.org/relay/community-resources/eff-tor-legal-faq/)
* [OONI disclaimer](https://ooni.io/about/risks/)
diff --git a/content/user-testing/current/contents.lr
b/content/user-testing/current/contents.lr
index 1d10937..d71015f 100644
--- a/content/user-testing/current/contents.lr
+++ b/content/user-testing/current/contents.lr
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ image: clipboard
---
_template: layout.html
---
-title: Currently Testing Stuffs
+title: Currently Testing Stuffs[FIXME]
---
-subtitle: Link to somewhere we csan update more than this webpage, even
banners will be tedious if we do testing all the time. We can even oput some
thing puilled from there and have it populated here.
+subtitle: Link to somewhere we can update more than this webpage, even banners
will be tedious if we do testing all the time. We can even output some thing
pulled from there and have it populated here.[FIXME]
---
key: 1
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