Tom Ritter:
> Some small suggestions:
>
>  - I'd flip the bottom and the top, with connect being on top.
>
>  - Wording suggestion:
> "This computer's internet connection is free of obstacles:
> [greenboldtext]My network operator does not threaten my person
> safety[/greenboldtext]
> "This computer's Internet connection is [redboldtext]censored,
> filtered, or proxied[/redboldtext]

Nitpick: you might be configuring someone else's computer, so “my” might
not be appropriate.

In some future, having stylized images on that screen could be great.

In any cases, it's already quite an improvement. :)

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Lunar                                             <lu...@torproject.org>

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