On Thu, 7 Jan 2010, Greg DeKoenigsberg wrote: > Comments encouraged. Since I consider this to be an actual completed > draft (although you may not upon reading it, heh) please put comments > on the talk page, rather than editing the page directly: > > http://en.flossmanuals.net/bin/view/PracticalOSSEngineering/IntroductionToFOSSTalk
Hey Greg, I've read over both the foreward as well as the introductory chapter that you posted about here. A few comments about the intro chapter are on the talk page, as you requested. I really like the voice/tone of the writing. It's formal, without being stuffy, which I think makes it easy for people to want to keep reading, and see what comes next. In particular, I love "contributor mountain". You've taken an idea that we talk about a lot in speeches, and written it down far more eloquently than the crappy first pass at the same thing that I made, because you gave it a metaphor and personalized it. --Max _______________________________________________ tos mailing list [email protected] http://teachingopensource.org/mailman/listinfo/tos
