Hello vi1985, As in my feedback to Jphr proposal I'm mainly concerned with producing a good Road Map. I would recommend that you expand "Timeline (Big Checkpoints)" section and turn it into a "Road Map" with estimated dates.
Specially important are "functional milestones", these are where you say specific things which will work - for example, "A client will be able to login and view the universe", "A player will be able to place units", etc. They should be testable by your mentor externally, something like "The framework will be done" is not suitable. You should be more specific then your current timeline. Of course these dates will change as you get more information - but it should be good for seeing if you have included enough work. We are happy to help you adjust your timeline as we have better knowledge on how long certain things will take. Could you also expand the initial description. This will be publicly available to everyone at the end of the program so should be fairly informative. Hope this helps. Tim 'Mithro' Ansell On Mon, 2008-03-24 at 12:30 -0400, Victor Ivri wrote: > Hey everyone, > Thanks for the great feedback. After 4 days of constant editing, I > believe proposal is now in its final format. You can find it here. If > there is anything else you would like to see in it, or if you have any > questions or concerns, please feel free to email me, or simply leave > your comments on the wiki page. > > vi1985 > > PS- For those of you who already took their time to become familiar > with it, just a note that it has evolved considerably over the last > few days in pretty much all respects, as a function of the feedback I > got, and of my increasing knowledge base about TP and the RFTS > ruleset. _______________________________________________ tp-devel mailing list [email protected] http://www.thousandparsec.net/tp/mailman.php/listinfo/tp-devel
